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AGE: 26
LOC: Kernersville, NC
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: February 21

I have many names.. and many “faces.”

Poetical Addendum
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Take from them what you will.. piece it together yourself.

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Lyrics / I Remember You
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Talk a walk in my room The lights are off and we know its way too soon. Talk a walk in my shoes What else would you have me do. (I wanna feel me next to you)   Wake up in the morning Our clothes are all strewn on the floor. You wake up and say "good morning" Yes my dear it certianly is just that. (what a morning and what a night we had)   ::Chorus:: I remember you naked I remember you whole and incomplete. I remember you faking I remember you were all I'd ever need. (Yah, ...
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Poetry / Shamble On
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Walking, stumbling, waiting for my purpose to realize I am lost in the distance. I can not forsee the limits I must break or boundries I must tame. He lies my broken heart. Right beside so many hopes and dreams, torn and shattered in the reckoning of this life's unending refrain. I am so uncomplete and discontent in the face of momentous discord. Left in disrepair, I continue to shamble on as the dusk light wains. He calls and I answer but to no avail. Hopeless in this life of lies. Ripped fr...
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Quotes / Quiting
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If quitters never win and winners never quit.. Who came up with quit while your ahead?
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Quotes / Determination
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When one is eating ice cream with a fork, one should be determined in the task, for, if thou should tarry too long, the ice cream will become too pliable for the fork to manage.
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Poetry / Heart
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If I could rip out my heart And live I'd have done it I know what it's like to die How sad it is to see Your tears cry tears of their own Walking in a weary daze of disappointment I whisper love As this heart sings with a pain Pain that has pain of its own I am washed ashore broken in the tide Endless is this grief Which claims the heart of me
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Flash Fiction / The Young Wife
this is a very interesting story with a somewhat sweet ending. I think I would put less detail in the gross intro and focus more on the great great granny's experience. And while X rated include some romance in it. If that is your intent. Perhaps her description of the nightly visits could be more romantic and graphic allowing you to keep the X rating. And end it exactly the same. It would give readers this broad and detailed vision of love and romance and drop off with a Fuck me every night....
I really like this poem but I am not thrilled with the first part. In the form you are using you need to be consistent throughout the entire poem. This feels like two poems smooshed together. The first part being one poem and the 2nd and 3rd being one poem. I see how they are connected but I don't think it is enough. If this is to be one poem, I would find some more ways to connect the first part and use a consistent form throughout the entire piece.
Lyrics / Marijane
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