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LOC: Kimberling City, MO
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We’re all here, but we’re all alone Waiting, watching, uncertain, afraid We gave up everything, seeking our new home Now we’re adrift as into His tomb He is laid. The candle is dark The gold box has grown dim It’s empty, it’s open No presence of Him. Was it all just a lie? Was it all just a con? Why did He die? We thought He was the One. It’s just another room now Another meeting The presence is gone Was it so fleeting? Devastation like nothing felt before Enveloped them as they locked their ...
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Everyone knows of the Holocaust that killed six million Jews. What many people don’t realize is that Catholics were ruthlessly persecuted by the Nazis, especially those in the religious life. Priests were hated and rounded up. One such priest was prisoner number 16770 in the death camp at Auschwitz. His name was Father Maximilian Kolbe. Father Kolbe knew early on what his mission in life would be. He said that Our Lady appeared to him. In his own words, he said “..she came to me holding two c...
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A very well written story. I can't condone the action, but the story was well constructed.
I would change the first three lines. "today I'm going to talk to you" "the reason I chose to tell you" etc. are unneccessary phrases that distract from your speech. Hit 'em hard from the beginning. I would start with "Human trafficking is the..." Some spelling errors, I don't know if you want those pointed out. How long is this speech supposed to be? More statistics would be good if you have time to fit them in.
Good. A few misplaced commas. Interesting concept; I could see this being the basis for something longer.
So are we condemned to an endless succession of Bushes and Clintons until both lines die off? Too cynical for my taste as well as overdone content.
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