I like the imagery of physically removing someone from your heart and body. I'd like to see this expanded.

Unique; I wouldn't have thought to write about my pillow. Most people can easily relate to this.

I like the idea; I'm curious about the secret. Your use of language is a bit stilted, though. Some sentences seem short and cut off. For example, the first paragraph--some of the sentences could have been combined in a way that flows more easily. I'll look at the other parts you've posted.

I was distracted by punctuation--sometimes it was there, sometimes it wasn't. Interesting take on the dissolution of marriage. It took me a bit to realize what the paper was. Made me think!

I didn't expect the woman to die, especially after we briefly go to know her. Overall, it was very enjoyable. I'm really surprised to see you're only 15, your way with words is quite good. The line about being a gravity ride from hell didn't seem to fit; I would find another way to describe it.

So are we condemned to an endless succession of Bushes and Clintons until both lines die off? Too cynical for my taste as well as overdone content.

Good. A few misplaced commas. Interesting concept; I could see this being the basis for something longer.

I would change the first three lines. "today I'm going to talk to you" "the reason I chose to tell you" etc. are unneccessary phrases that distract from your speech. Hit 'em hard from the beginning. I would start with "Human trafficking is the..." Some spelling errors, I don't know if you want those pointed out. How long is this speech supposed to be? More statistics would be good if you have time to fit them in.

A very well written story. I can't condone the action, but the story was well constructed.

Need an apostrophe--it's. Very true.