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AGE:
29
LOC: United States
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 12
LOC: United States
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 12
Who am I? Well…that’s a very good question. Somedays, I am not very sure, my head is full of varying ideas on the subject. On other days, I’m cystal clear about who I am and what I want to be. At the core, I’m a poet. That’s my heart. I love writing, and I enjoy the reading as well. I’m tempermental. I’m experimental…that is to say that I don’t mind trying new things. I can be very loving and kind I’m told…and evidently the complete opposite when angered. I suppose that’s me. I’m a paradox and an enigma. I am much like the stone of my birth, the diamond. There is a strength there that might not be seen at first, but is still somehow evident. And there many facets to my personality. It seems sometimes that life is int…
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05 April 2007 0258 Your eyes…they don’t belong here. Not on this earth, not in this time, this setting… You’ve got the eyes of an angel. A hazel eyed, deeply sorrowful angel. You have eyes that speak volumes, For that take in all the joy And the sorrow All the love And the pain Of this life we live and lead And they hold it there, blazing… Glowing like cat eyes in the moonlight You know, when the light hits them just right And you swear for a moment that it was a creature Not of this world, B...
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I…can’t hold it back any longer My blood is pumping hard in my ears Heart beating against the walls of my chest I NEED this… I MUST have this…pleasure This moment of overtaking passion This…feeding…I MUST Calm this crazing in my flesh. And YOU are the key…the meat that will N o u r i s h ME Long into the night. Forgive me because I’m about to get VICIOUS Turn up the juice on the lovemaking scale And just go for sex Everybody needs some serious, straight out, rock the bed Headboard knocking, s...
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Venomous chick, spitting poison from between your lips, Fatal tongue, dropping words like acid on the weary souls, Who do you think you are? Do you think I don't see you, Don't feel you trying to bite me? But your teeth won't sink in, my skin's thick like armor. I'm covered by stronger powers than the vileness in your mouth, I am resistant. Almost had me there, upset and irritated, Saying your words as though kind, but laced with deadly substances, I can sniff the air and breath in the scent ...
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Venomous chick, spitting poison from between your lips, Fatal tongue, dropping words like acid on the weary souls, Who do you think you are? Do you think I don't see you, Don't feel you trying to bite me? But your teeth won't sink in, my skin's thick like armor. I'm covered by stronger powers than the vileness in your mouth, I am resistant. Almost had me there, upset and irritated, Saying your words as though kind, but laced with deadly substances, I can sniff the air and breath in the scent ...
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My beautiful, lovely, talented, attractive, sensual, sexy sistas... Fine like summertime on the beach, Waves of crystal blue water breaking on the shore, Sand white as snow, fine and smooth. My sistas. Intelligent, thoughtful, insightful, wise, sistas... You remind me of springtime. Everything new...soft...gentle to the touch, All your senses happily fuzzy with the feeling of the life in the air, All things temperate to the point of rightness... Perfection. My sweet, sweet sistas. Loving sist...
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It feels a little unfinished to me. There are some typos and such, but that's minor. The main thing is the sense that it's not over. It's a good establishment, but after that you're left with the feeling of "well...what now?" That's basically what I'm getting right now. Good start, but the race is not over!
This story as the cold, dark feel of the inner city. I say that, because in all truth, that's the only time I've been in the "inner city," through books and people that have lived there and are willing to express it. It's got the puncutations of light that give it a really grimy edge, like bright spots that make the dirt so up better. I didn't think I'd like it originally, but as it turns out, I really did. Good work.
You lost me at the "fags and butts for back up" line. That doesn't make any sense to me, but then again I could just be missing the reference.
I have to tell you the truth. I hate stories like this, mainly because of my own convictions and ideas. That, coupled with the fact that most of the time "sista girl" stories like this are so much trash that they are unbearable to read. That being said, I have to commend you on this piece. Very well written. I felt a lot of tension building up in it, felt it good and strong. I enjoyed the descriptions, right now to the end, the way you brought the though processes of the main character and ev...
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