I can see why this is "non fiction", because it's opinion. However this is more of a journal/blog entry than "non fiction". You haven't said anything telling, illuminating, academic or interesting. I understand your sentiment, but you've touch upon a subject that my senior thesis is on. You're still young, I hope you grow to expand your horizons past "good", "bad", and conventional morals.

Employing stanzas will make this easier to read. Remember the golden rule of writing - "Show and not tell". You're telling a lot but not showing the reader or audience anything. This is more of cliche filled monologue than a poem.

The repetition of lines and words would be great if the language and sentiment wasn't so common place.

This poem is to-heavy content wise and visually. The use of enjambment at the end make it look more awkward than interesting and doesn't add to the sentiment. Good Start.

Is this about death? The subject isn't clear, but it still eludes the reader. Fleshing it out will make it more accessible.

The use of Latin does give a distinct feel to this poem, it goes well withe the rest of the language. However, it does slow down the reader because it's uncommon. There are times when the images are so heavy that the reader is swimming in their head. It's a very cerebral poem and very good, which is difficult to accomplish.