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Poetry / Ode to mother
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This is just a poem some words put together But the emotion behind it keeps it bonded forever And there a lot of words that I can use to describe how I feel But one word that does is real And so happens the day I appreciate thee Is the same day you conceived me You are reason of my being The song in my heart And the sacrifices you made for me I dont know were to start And my gratefulness, sometime I show some time I dont But taking you for granted I wont I love you and this poem just a fragme...
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Poetry / Ode to mother
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This is just a poem some words put together But the emotion behind it keeps it bonded forever And there a lot of words that I can use to describe how I feel But one word that that I know that does is real And so happens the day I appreciate thee Is the same day you conceived me You are reason of my being The song in my heart And the sacrifices for me I dont know were to start And my gratefulness, some time I show some time I dont But taking you for granted I wont I love you and this poem just...
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Poetry / The Zoo
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The lines The bars that keep my thoughts inside The paper The shadows were the creatures hide The book An exhibit of my inner beasts The INK The Lifeblood the animals eat The father The creator of the beasts he refuses to shun THE PEN The mother of her forsaken sons The Animals They may seem savage to you My Feeling Are the beasts in The ZOO
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Pulled over handed cuff Reserved the right to remain silent Rough up beat down Who give the right to remain violent? Fight back I'm a dead man Blood trickles down my face Concrete were my face lands Police brutality in NY I'll never win a case See I'm blacker then a his nightstick I hate to scream racist But behind all the bruises are all black faces
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Poetry / under tone
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It may seem that the world is design to black folk behind But we still stare ignorantly on porches littered with chicken bones and watermelon rinds Are the bars were behind are own? We have to stop thinking it all about skin tone Were composed of the same number of chromosomes But one race we are not So what if I am a little burnt We were all cook out of the same pot The racism has simmered deeper And boiled over into the schools Were light skinned was pretty And being dark skinned wasnt cool...
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This is very deep. When I was reading it I can just hear the melody in my head. Is this a chirstian song because it can be seen as one.
Poetry / Harcore Poet Rap
If you were looking for the nerdy cornball rhytm similar to vanllia ice you got it but it laugh out loud funny though
Poetry / Baby Angel
This a beauiful poem and the last stanza summarizes the poem greatly.The good Lord will take care of your wonderful unborn child.
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This is a really good but the rhyme scheme could be more constant unless that was your plan
over all it was a really good poem
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