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AGE:
60
LOC: Rickman, TN
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: January 11
LOC: Rickman, TN
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: January 11
My name is Rick, and I live in the hills of Middle Tennessee. I am a teacher and writer. This is my first novel about a group of people that live in caves in Tennessee.They are only ten inches tall and call themselves Spelons. This book tells how they save the life of a man and help him find his way back to his family.
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As the bolt slid back, it pulled a shining new cartridge into the open chamber of the high-powered rifle. The sleek lead bullet moved effortlessly into the breech. A strong steady hand deliberately eased the bolt forward cradling the lethal projectile in preparation for its eventful journey. A glint of sunlight reflected momentarily from the cold blue steel of the rifle, as an unknown thumb moved quietly to release the safety. All is ready. The cross hairs of the Weaver 3X9 power scope fell ...
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The story will probably be vary appealing to young people, and the fact that such a young author is writing it will make it even more believable. The description is very graphic and you seem to try and bring the reader into the story on a personal level. Some of the dialogue is a bit long and tends to drag a bit. I thing the story has real promise. Keep writing and working Rick
I thought the writing was fresh and easy to read. It became somewhat slow at times and caused me to lose interest for a moment. The idea for the book is great. It is quite amusing and generates a question in the readers mind about what it would really be like to make that fantastic journey back in time. Keep up the good work. Rick
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Very fresh writing style. You have developed the characters very well, I can feel the personalities of the people involved. This is definitely a story that one could really get into. Hope it turns out well for you. Good luck RM
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Very well written. I like the dialogue. It stays upbeat and invites the reader to become part of the conversation. Much better than most I have read here. Good luck with it. RM
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The story is beginning to develop. It started out a bit slow, but slowly brought me into the story. There seems to be quiet a bit of filler sentences that made me scratch my head and say, "Why was that in there?". The last two chapters began to pique my interest. The chase scene in Ch 5. was very vivid. It made you feel as though were being chased. It seems to be developing very well. Should turn out to be a nice read. Good Luck
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