Raevnsong's profile

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AGE: 38
LOC: Pompano Beach, FL
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: May 03

Hi.  I’ve been writing songs and poetry for about 20 years and consider myself an experienced classical “free versist” (to coin a phrase).

I value the input of other experienced poets greatly and welcome critique.

I also have a poetry blog on myspace…all are invited to read and share.

~Raevnsong

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Poetry / First Embrace
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First Embrace - By Christopher Britt Oh lover, fair with moonlit eyes For you my heart does ache With depths of passion yet untapped by mortals, love to make Your silken hair of fire gold Your eyes of twilight blue Have put to shame the star-lit night in beauty next to you Oh lover of my waking thoughts and Dreams that come by eve Come to me now my love, my soul and grant this heart reprieve These gentle lips do for you wait These hands to show you grace Will cause us never to forget this nig...
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Romance / First Embrace
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First Embrace - By Christopher Britt Oh lover, fair with moonlit eyes For you my heart does ache With depths of passion yet untapped by mortals, love to make Your silken hair of fire gold Your eyes of twilight blue Have put to shame the star-lit night in beauty next to you Oh lover of my waking thoughts and Dreams that come by eve Come to me now my love, my soul and grant this heart reprieve These gentle lips do for you wait These hands to show you grace Will cause us never to forget this nig...
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Romance / My Love, My Soul
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My Love, My Soul (Aug 22, 2006) Shadows lengthen slowly o’er The place our hearts did meet Where are thee moon, light of my soul? Where is thy watchful gaze? These eyes are sorely blinded, for They long for blissful sleep Yet, still I wait. Be still my soul Wait ‘til the end of day. For in the gentle gloaming hour When sun meets western deep The moon shall light unto my soul And light her beckoned way. Oh, maiden fairly bless-ed, our Two hearts do run in league For love, I risk eternal soul F...
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Romance / My Love, My Soul
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My Love, My Soul (Aug 22, 2006) Shadows lengthen slowly o’er The place our hearts did meet Where are thee moon, light of my soul? Where is thy watchful gaze? These eyes are sorely blinded, for They long for blissful sleep Yet, still I wait. Be still my soul Wait ‘til the end of day. For in the gentle gloaming hour When sun meets western deep The moon shall light unto my soul And light her beckoned way. Oh, maiden fairly bless-ed, our Two hearts do run in league For love, I risk eternal soul F...
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Poetry / My Love, My Soul
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My Love, My Soul (Aug 22, 2006) Shadows lengthen slowly o'er The place our hearts did meet Where are thee moon, light of my soul? Where is thy watchful gaze? These eyes are sorely blinded, for They long for blissful sleep Yet, still I wait. Be still my soul Wait 'til the end of day. For in the gentle gloaming hour When sun meets western deep The moon shall light unto my soul And light her beckoned way. Oh, maiden fairly bless-ed, our Two hearts do run in league For love, I risk eternal soul F...
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Hi, I am very familiar with Winnie the pooh and friends, but confess that I was bit surprised to see someone expounding on C. Robin's life as he grew up and out of the Hundred Acre Wood of his childhood fantasy's...I almost did not take this story seriously...but strangely, I could not stop reading...I wanted to know what he said to earn such a beating.
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Poetry / Loving you
I really enjoyed this poem from a reader's stand point, and appreciated your free verse style of expression. The poem is perfect, written for an individual to read. I think, though, if you want the appreciation of the broader world relating to and enjoying your work, then you might want to consider writing with less use of terms such as "you, I, me and my". I would challenge you to count how many times such terms are found in this poem. As I said, it is perfect as a personal poem written to a...
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Poetry / By Mine Own
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Quotes / Open Eyes
I'm a man, but understand this all too well.
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