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AGE: 18
LOC: Lansing, MI
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 12

My name is Rain. That’s obviously my pseudonym. My other alias is Rain E. Daze. I write poetry and stories, but mostly poetry. My writing is like a mirror to me. For you, a portrait of me. My mental window for you to look into. When you read it, realize that it is a piece of me, and giving it love, gives me love, and helps me, and my writing, to grow and improve.

By the way, sometimes I mention my poetry journals names. My first one was “R.E.D. Rozez or Dead Rozez”(The Pen-itentiary), My second one was “Tha Prophecy: A Reminiscence of the Past and Future”(The Mirror), My most recent is “Euphoria”(The Diamond Sutra).

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I wonder what God did to make you so cute- I wonder what i did to make you so mute- I wonder if the excitment i see is real- i wonder deep inside your hart, what do you feel- I wonder if you hate me- The look you give sedates me- Major sedation- I bet in perverts you provoke masturbation- You can use your eyes to hypnotize- Tranquilize, when i look in them eyes- Mezmerize- Intoxicate- What's our fate?- Will we date?- Mate?- For heavens sakes- Just to see your smile again i'd do whatever it ta...
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Chapter 1: Enter the Mist Mister Daze, first name Rain- Pencil in hand, behind me a hurricane- I'm so complex, figure out what I meant- Rain, the freshest thing to hit your cement- Stay around when I arrive and get ya head wet- Your eardrums blown from what I ain't even said yet- Poetic Vet, and yeah I have scars- I'm an extraterrestrial with flavor like Mats- And yeah, I'm the god of war, but I'm also Orpheus, leave the depths of hell with some stories to tell- I take a gasoline shower, and ...
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Poetry / Suicide!
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I see you cry, i feel your pain- But then I see you, Stick that syringe in your vein- It kills you slow, What's it's name? It has so many while they're all the same- You press the plunger, And it puts you under- And you want it more, like starvation or hunger?- You're so addicted, I can't intervene- Cause' if it was me, Your system would be clean- I can help you, redeem your soul- So throw away the needles, and come in from the cold- -Rain From "Tha Prophecy"
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Damn Depression Here I am confessin Learnin a lesson i thought i already finished Running in circles I've already been down this road I try to turn back to avoid it But the gravitational vacuum from the wormhole sucks me in And i'm back in this darkness floatin' by Am i falling towards hell or the celestial sky? A teardrop falls in the black and the abyss swallows it Looking for a way out I'm hoping i'm dreamin' I woke up, masturbating in a bed with demons The demons smile and laugh but i see...
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She queen of the world and the biggest whore Embracing the rich and abandon the poor The poor are under anarchy cause she do shit for 'em And she our ruler? And so many serve her as slaves N people without her live in boxes n caves Those with her throw huge parties n raves and niggas put her pussy on a pedestal, saying it's golden Some need her, but the rich are holdin' her but yet there's still some hungry, starving, crying, dying and for her, politicians are lying cause' she the base of cor...
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Poetry / Nine Numbers
Ha. I like it. It's very "witty" for lack of a better word. I think it's so true that out SSN is always called our "identity", and it's not who we are.
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Poetry / I am what I am.
This is very good. I love the analogies/metaphor/similies. Whatever they're called.
Young Adult / Temptation
Just the first paragraph is enough to make you keep reading. It is excellent. It makes you almost wonder about why, and just FORCES you to keep going fo a little while.
Excellent. Very beautiful and makes a lot of sense.
Poetry / Scars
Wow. This is excellent. Very clear, and it makes a lot of sense.
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