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AGE:
23
LOC: Ireland
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 09
LOC: Ireland
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 09
Influenced by the works of Herman Melville, Jack Kerouac, Charles Bukowski, Tom Waits, Bob Dylan, Johnny Cash, William Burroughs, Stephen King, Bruce Springsteen, Ledbelly, Woody Guthrie, George Orwell, Richard Matheson, Phillip K. Dick and Hunter S. Thompson.
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The wanderer of the wastes aimlessly stirred the embers of the fire with a twig. Shivering in the faint light he pulled his over-coat tight around his gaunt shoulders. The old stone farmstead offered little protection from the biting wind outside. He smiled dryly thinking that every winter seemed to grow more and more bitter as the years passed. The wind rattled the rotten wooden doorframe as he glanced around, noting the weeds growing up through the rotting floorboards. They seemed to flouri...
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Now the greyhound pulls away from the diner Now like a silver bullet Riding through the desrt morn, He's alone now, just him and his guitar case And the open road, rising out before him That thin white line, Snakin' out, splittin' the highway Now he's in the Washington, room 315 Laughin' and jokin' with the girl As she cooks up a spoonful "This'll fix you right darling" She winks as he floats into oblivion Now the world comes crashin' back As he shivers and shakes The girl's long gone, gone w...
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Writing a novel is comparable with attempting to cross the ocean in just a canoe
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To kiss and to dance To waltz with you 'neath the pale moon The lips, they lie They belong not to your heart You are just another passenger Passing through, wasting time, Soft and timid Seeking shelter To pass the time Until you leave For distant shores This soul, you hold no tender here It was never yours to take.
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Its night and Mahoney stands, shoulders back, On the corner of 79th and 3rd Watching the marks, the fools, The suits, the pimps, the hustlers, Traipsing by, trapped within The asbesto's of their problems, He can almost hear their thoughts, Inscribed upon their faces; "Goddamn rent is due", "Goddamn bitch lying to me" "Goddamn cops, I can feel 'em Circling like vultures" They disgust him, crawling round In this society of detritus A junkie shuffles past; "Some change for a hostel pal?" "Fuckin...
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First of all, story wise i think its a good move that the protagonist isn't a part of some kind of law enforcement, which is different from the vast majority of main characters within the genre. The story sounds like something i would like to read. The email is well written, a minor piece of critiscm is there are double spaces between some words which is slighty disruptive to reading but otherwise an A1 piece, I didnt come across any spelling mistakes.
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i thought this piece was about spirituality but then towards the end it struck me as a love poem. i like how you likened the concept of falling in love to a spiritual journey. the last two lines in particular i liked, which i understood as one person reaching for another. the piece is very well written.
i liked it a lot a very poignant piece, i particulalry liked the image of the two cigarette packs together originally being a cause of anxiety, and then a feeling of safety as the feet are rested. Its a well written piece and the narrative flow is clear.
i liked this piece, at first reading i thought it was about a child mourning a parents death then i read your notes and realised it was a different. thats a good thing in my opinion that it has more than one meaning, theres a lot of nice imagery in the poem especially the last three lines
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