Raphael's profile
AGE:
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LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 24
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 24
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I should have known by now. I should have given myself more time. But time it's hard to bear when time, you feel, could last forever. Is it time, high, powerful time, to be the judge of our lives? Will all our effort to make a decent living be paid off one day, and we will be said "yes you did well"? Is there such a thing of doing well? "I was meant to learn in the way i had chosen to, atrociuos blink of happiness followed by foreseen desperation" I should have taken responsibilities for my a...
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Ehy to u congratulations I didn’t think that with that face u could have been such a disgrace but Congratulations… Ehy to u congratulations because you live - still - breathe and eat forgot the guilt of having killed and so Congratulations Baby u know that I don’t like u anymore Maybe u knew I cant take in more than that U made me happy and then took back And I don’t wanna like u anymore Ehy to u congratulations I've heard ur heart never breaks up its like a stone cold and bored so for that w...
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You made it hard to listen to, and I made it hard to accept, Music made it hard to forget And dreams made it hard to escape from. I don't wanna listen to your voice, only to learn how to accept in order to forget I'm just good at escape From. I've ran through the fields of my mind, no wonder why, I fell, fell, fell, It's time to toast now! I've lost you behind! Was it a dream? Or you were with me? Were we running and then you fell? I was laughing and left you there. Oh my darling, My darling ...
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A melody, far, whisper of laugh. Two young lovers, passionate embraces, smiles to the time. I stand, low head, staring at the window of the world you have denied.
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A black patch on the pillow Eyes fixing the wall How can the room be so white when the pillow is so black how u have just so denied My rimmel is gone melt on white sheets bed Another round, please, another round whiskey on the rocks crashing thoughts on liquid rocks, I've never thought it could have been so easy to shipwrecked, rescue forces stop them all I wanna sink in sweet liquid nectar of love. My rimmel is gone melt, black patches on the pillow. The bottom of the glass, melted rocks and...
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Are we all frugal bastard then? Am i only typing this because i wanna earn my credits in order to review my silly writing? Maybe, or maybe not. But, as a matter of fact i did read your words.
There is something unexplicably sad about your work. And it's really hard to trace it. Who is it acting as if it was worse? I couldn't understand your point on this piece.
It may seems only a cliche at first read. But unfortunately it has to be said that we never stop learning. I liked your way of writing as if you were asking questions and giving answers at the same time, exposing your feelings as they were coming out of your brain.
I didn't really get the point of this poetry. You seemed to curse something happened to you in the past, maybe your roots, the isolation of being part of two different countries and cultures and then you say that there was none of all that - concluded there was no giants - As if the giants were those who had chosen your lifepath but then nobody really did so as "there were no giants". Is it some sort of release you were trying to communicate?
I really enjoyed this poem and the way you expressed such a feeling of destruction through the metaphor of death. And the inevitable dstiny we all are subject to of the time turning into death is really good. The child, the young man and then the old man, all part of one process of life.
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