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AGE: 48
LOC: Berkeley, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 10

My work is an ongoing interactive writing project. The Strangest Story Ever Told is designed to be published as a graphic novel divided into 7 sections. A basic outline has been written but details are added by several methods which includes; dreams, meditation, reviews, automatic writing, the cutup writing technique, trance channeling and interviews. My other writings are articles, poems, games and essays for a book called Forbidden Knowledge, one of 7 Universal Game projects.

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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Strangest story ever told- part 2
Version 1
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 Part 2:   Once I was inside the doorway the door closed and I was in total darkness. I was in a dreamlike state for an unknown length of time. It could have been minutes, even hours before I even realized that my eyes were closed. As I opened them I could see I was on solid ground and surrounded by vegetation. As I walked a sunlit path leading up to a plateau I felt a profound feeling of déjà vu. My senses tingled at the slightest breeze. The air itself was sweet and ...
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / The strangest story ever told
Version 4
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 The strangest story ever told- part 1 (2009 version) I am here in the silent isolation of this room with everything at my fingertips; the internet, cable, radio ,newspapers and books, lots of books. At first it was all part of my obsessive search for the truth. I became so possessed that I had to face the possibility that maybe the experts were correct, that I am a paranoid schizophrenic with delusions of grandeur. But no, At long last I have found what I had been looking for all along ...
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Poetry / Glamourized
by thepierunner
Hi, This poem dug into me on several levels. It made me think of my sister, the "child of a star" I thought of my fathers death last week bringing "hope and sadness" I've read all of your posted poems and this one made me feel something personal. The red goop is a mystery to me, is that bad? All I could think of is blood- or lipstick!
Horror / In the room
by Anonymous
This story is a true, pure horror. I found a few typos like ...He can sees. But the darkness of this piece certainly deserves commentary. It's amazing how many buttons are pushed in such a short story. Scary! I would like to see how well you can tell a longer story, the true test of a shock writer.
Sci Fi & Fantasy / Sumelia Katari-Chapter 1
by Sumelia
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / The Lost Truth-Chapter 1
by slbynum3
In the first sentence is it really necessary to write the word necessary? On page two "had had" I think one "had" works better. Vorru is a 7ft elf but I always read that elves are small and considered a race of little people, are you breaking with tradition or is he a mutation? Anyway, the story is exciting with good pacing and descriptions. I really felt transported into another realm.
Sci Fi & Fantasy / Mr.Bad and The Beginning of The League
by Verte
Page 1: Good start with a mature style. Are the rubies really rubies or are they ruby-like, or ruby colored? Consider changing "varying circumstances" to various. Overall an interesting segment with good imaginative details. I will look for more to surmise the overall impact.
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