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LOC: Greenville, SC
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Soul Search “Premier Travel Agency. This is Reagan. How may I help you?” “Reagan? When did they talk you into doing switchboard?” It was then that I realized who I was talking to. “Aidan! Long time since I last talked to you. I'll tell you, a lot of things have changed since you left. Which, by the way, I'm still mad at you for leaving me here! You do realize that now Rebekah will complete my training?” “Yeah, yeah,” Aidan said, “I kinda miss my goofy redhead!” “Ha, ha. So, what's up?” “I nee...
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One word-WOW. Of the pieces I have read so far, details seem to be lacking. With this piece, I could see everything that was in the decsription. I felt like I was in the library, I could invision the monster. That was awesome. I would like to read more on the monster, who is she? It was an interesting point of view from the man's perspective like that. Most of the time we only get the evil monster killing the human. But, there was justification in it so we fill compelled to have sympathy for ...
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One word - WOW!! I love this concept. I haven't come across an original vampire concept since I started reading Sherilyn Kenyon. And, just so you know, she's my favorite author, so this is a big compliment from me. Within the first few paragraphs, I was hooked, and wanting to know what happened next. I was somewhat disappointed when it ended, but only because I wanted to continue reading. All right, now the critique part. Watch your comma usage, you had quite a few run-on sentences because of...
Your concept is interesting and makes me want to know more of the story. An original idea. There are some grammatical issues to deal with, such as misspelled words and some comma usage, but, overall, the prologue interests me. I'm guessing that because of some (not all) of the grammatical issues, there is some choppiness to the story. The flow was a little off. But, as I said, I still want to read more, so good job.
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