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AGE:
15
LOC: Vinton, VA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: February 20
LOC: Vinton, VA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: February 20
Hello :)
My name is Colleen Renea and I am fourteen.
If you review me, be sure to get a message back. :)
If you don’t like what I write, that’s most certainly NOT my problem
Any questions?
Email me.
colleengetsit@aim.com
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You're a fake, You little bitch. You're a stupid cunt, How you lie and snitch. You need to be shot. Your stupid lies. I hope you die, Cause you are in my eyes. Your shit annoys me, How it hurts others so. You don't notice? Okay, Woah. Your shit is a shame. One day you'll realize, That when I'm gone, You're dead in my eyes. I hope you find this out, Oh yes, I do. And when it happens, I'll be looking for you. To shoot you down, and kill your hopes. To grab your neck, and slit your throat. Then ...
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Take away my horrid pain, and try to make me completely sane. Kiss away the tears that came, the ones that came like acid rain. 5 Don't ever be afraid to choke, Hide far away from stupid folk. As you watch your life disappear in smoke, Things once whole will be broke. Looking through the graveyard gates, 10 Knowing you're the one everyone hates. Fearing to face the horrid fates, Watching time pass slowly as you wait. Loving the hate of being unknown, Never with someone, always alone. 15 Far ...
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You Have No Idea - By Paige St. Clair - You have no idea of what it's like to be me To be so depressed, thinking I’ll never be free At night tears of sorrow and loss fill my face As people tell me I’m just a worthless disgrace My brain sends signals that say I want to die But when I’m about to, I just can’t say goodbye You don’t even care about my shattered heart It is much too hard for me to know we're apart No matter what, I simply cannot let go of you I keep saying to myself you feel the s...
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All I'm gonna do is just go on and do what I feel. -Jimi Hendrix
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I'm not going to change the way I look or the way I feel to conform to anything. I've always been a freak. So I've been a freak all my life and I have to live with that, you know. I'm one of those people. -John Lennon
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This is great!(: I cannot express how much I love repetition of certain phrases in areas of a poem. As I read, I pictured what was happening, and that is true poetry. Such distinct characteristics are so wonderful in a poem. I enjoyed this very much.
I love the detail. I felt as if I was there. I like the metaphors. There is lack of punctuation, but I'm sure if you reread you'll find where. The ending was interesting, I must say. Getting a letter from an ex and then ending up chatting with females online? Makes me wonder if the woman who wrote the letter wasn't an online female. All in all, I liked this. Very interesting. Would love to read more, or an exceeding chapter to this.
I like the repetition of the quote, "Fly me to the moon, let me play among the stars." I overall like that quote. This sort of reminds me of a book I once read. The 'Uglies' Series by Scott Westerfeld, mostly book "Pretties". I liked this(: Keep it up because I'd love to read more from you.
This is real good and I noticed you said this was a rough draft. I think it's fine the way it is, but could use some extra stanzas or additions. Otherwise, it's fine. Somewhat dark, I do believe, but that's just me. I enjoyed reading this piece. Tis well written.
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