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LOC: Boynton Beach, FL
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Why Me, BumbleBee!? (Small Child) Why me, BumbleBee Why can't you just let me be First my hand, then my knee And now you want to make it three (BumbleBee) I like to fly I like to sing I like to buzz In Summer and Spring I do not bite It's not my thing But I must admit That I love to sting (Small Child) But why me, BumbleBee Why can't you just let me be First my hand, then my knee And now you want to make it three You've stung me once, you've stung me twice I've paid my dues I've paid my price...
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I am not worthy of critiquing this poem as I am not in your league. That was great. Wouldn't change a thing.
Sounds like a poem written from Satan's perspective. While the topic can be disturbing to many the talent of the writer is very evident. Keep writing!
When we hate each other we are only hating ourselves. When we love each other we are loving life. We are all incredibly unique. We are so much of the same. That is what I got from the poem. I think the poem is one of those that will mean so many different things to the individual reader. I wouldn't change a thing.
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