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AGE:
21
LOC: Glen Allen, VA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 25
LOC: Glen Allen, VA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 25
Writing is in my blood, being a desecendant of Poe and all. The nuts and bolts I would like to think I have down, but insofar as getting into the business I have no idea what I’m doing. Hopefully, someone here will like what I do and set the various cogs and and sprockets in motion to get me there…
If you like fanatsy fiction, please come check out an excerpt from my new novel “Ruu,” on my myspace page. www.myspace.com/ringo_balboa Especially if you’re a publisher or literary agent!
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Book Seven: In Which I Learn Just How Much Trouble I’m In. Later, around midnight: “Hello, and welcome to the Ninth Level Of Hell’s automated hotline…” The voice on the machine was pretty, a combination of Welsh and Brooklyn accents that reminded me of that girl who did “Time After Time.” “We know you have a choice in infernal goods and services, and wish to express our deepest gratitude at allowing us the chance to earn your business. Our line is currently in use, but please remain seated an...
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This is just nit-picking, and I don't mean to rain, because I liked them a lot, but traditional haikus don't have titles. Other than that, it's all good.
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I'd say this strikes me more as a children's book than a poem. A very good children's book, but I think it would definately be more marketable that way...
Nekuiturnjs? Is that like a fnord? Hmm, Robert Mapplethorpe, there's a name I haven't heard in a while. I'm glad that you chose a name with actual relevence as an example instead of just picking the most recent one. That makes it easier to take you seriously. I gotta say, though, I think perhaps you might argue your point better if you hint at what you're getting at before you go off listing the side-effects of your love affair with media. As such, it seems like you changed yur mind about wha...
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I've never read a query letter myself (that I haven't written, I mean), but this would certainly get my attention.
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