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AGE: 59
LOC: Rockport, MA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 30

Biker Poet and Road Poet Lyceum at:
http://groups.myspace.com/RoadHousePress

You can also email me at: rdhousepress@aol.com but make sure you put: urbis in subject line so it does get lost in spam.

RoadHousePress.com is micro-press dedicated to helping the physically challenged writer. We also publish Biker Poets, Auto-Poets and Road Poets in chapbooks, columns and eZines. Submissions are welcome. I use the name of my business and my photo to protect my copyright on Urbis and other web based postings.  

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Poetry / Much Ado about nothing
Version 3
1 Review   1 Comment
Your review notes tell me one thing Your comment acts surprised Shocked that one has listened Read and then advised According to your directions You want to be publicized But really what you want to hear Is sweet-nothings in your ear
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Poetry / Passive Aggression (Revised 3rd time)
Version 13
10 Reviews   14 Comments
Feigned approval Usurped my time Cajoled a reply Kept a lid on me - Your oppressive Ostentation was Uninvited.
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Poetry / Social Phobia
by ambi31183
Locked
Short Story / Last Night
by icedsapphire
"when the doors had shut" = I think this particular line is a little muddled. Maybe a flash where she remembers blowing after the club closed rather than the doors shutting. Interesting twist of plot to have her be the killer.
Flash Fiction / 101110101110101110
by Jimmel104
http://www.fictionfactor.com/guests/flashfiction.html Not sure the ending has enough of a twist; it is actually predictable. Sent you a link for one of the better articles on short, short; flash; micro; etc.. I enjoyed the subject matter and thought this clever: had a protagonist, alludes to an antagonist, a conflict and a resolution ... but no twist ending.
Humor/Satire / STUCK IN THE WAITING ROOM - CHAPTER 2
by Sharon
One of the hardest things to do when writing a story is to cut out things we feel warm and fuzzy about.. "I say aloud, “Which of you lucky outfits will make the cut today?” = I would cut this, it doesn't add to anything and distracts. “Ladies and gentlemen, we have a winner,” I quietly announce. = same as above, just cut this out.. His gorgeousness is a little intimidating. = awkward writing,not necessary as it is telling not showing Love the tampon scene! Favorite Line: Why don’t I just thro...
Non-fiction / Walden: Thoreauly interesting reading
by nickbonelli
Locked
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