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LOC: NY, NY
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LOC: NY, NY
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Recently I spent an afternoon with my mother, sister, and nephew. This afternoon was fraught with questions, from my mother (When are you and Kate having children?), my sister (So did you finish your book yet?), and my nephew (Who is going to win the Steelers or the Broncos?) The answers were easy. Soon. Soon, hopefully. And Steelers. Of the three I was most confident about the Steelers because 1)my wife has been very sketchy with her birth control lately, 2)writing a book seems so much easie...
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I just now realized that I was married. I know that I should have known this earlier, especially since our second anniversary just pased. It may come as a surprise to you, but being married is not something that is consciously accepted. Being married is something that one may actually be completely oblivious to, as I am find myself to be living proof. How is it possible to be so oblivious? Much as I remained unconscious to my state of being, it is still unfair to consider this a state of obli...
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The anniversary of my grandfather's passing, as well as my latest brush with mortality floods my memory with a tidal wave of escapism. Amidst the flood come, one branch to reach for, and that is what my grandfather called 'Operation.' When I was a very small boy, my grandfather invented a game that he called “Operation.” He would seat me carefully on his firm and ample lap, lying still across him, and then slowly move his arms and hands gently over the area that needed 'surgery.' He would bel...
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I never felt as if the punctuation affected me, or effected the piece, in any way. Overall I felt that the piece was very touching, though the second stanza stands out as something that doesn't seem to fit the rest of the puzzle to me. It is as if you came out softly, roared, then returned meekly. Perhaps it is simply too much emotion in such a short piece, or perhaps you might like to extend this, and flesh out more of your feelings. A very nice start, but seeking more story in my opinion.
Can't do a better job grabbing people's (ahem guys most likely) attention than with a subject like Boobs. Of course, once I got reading it wasn't what I had bargained for :) Right off the bat our writing was very funny and held me in close, asking for more. But you did lose me at "Ladies..." and not because I am a guy. I didn't feel like this entry called out for a dialogue with the audience, rather I enjoyed it most as your recollections, and shared experiences. A nice read altogether though...
Although this piece was a bit rambling, I found myself laughing the whole time. I really enjoyed your humor on the topic. Very creative! It did seem a bit one-sided, which is fine, though I would have enjoyed your humorous take on the 'exceptions' to this rule...if you have experience with any.
Very clever and witty. I like playful pieces that incorporate a sense of the irony of language. I'm not sure what you intend to do with this piece, but I think it exists very well in its simplest form. Best of luck...
Very fun. I hear more of a song in it than a poem. Seems like something you could jam to.
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