Robsyn's profile

AGE: 20
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 01

I’m Robyn.
I’m English, I spell the English way, not the US way, don’t tell me it’s incorrect please.

I’m sixteen and write as a sixteen year old.

I love to read, and write, reviews and I rarely tell writers they SHOULD do something, I say they “could”, its their work do with as they wish and I do not take kindly to being told I should write something because a reviewer thinks it sounds better.

Love and Kisses.

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21 Reviews 5 Comments

Howl at the shining moon, my love, It hears you better than I. Caress the delicate clouds, my love, They could feel it as they pass by. Cry in the face of danger, my love, It feels deeper concern for you. Kiss the falling rain, my love, It responds more than I can do. Scream at a broken picture, my love, It might show some pain, you see. Walk out on an empty room, my love, It will call you back before me.

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18 Reviews 2 Comments

Howl at the shining moon my love. It hears you better than I. Caress the delicate clouds my love. They feel it better as they pass by. Cry in the face of danger my love. It has more concern for you. Kiss the falling rain my love. It responds better than me too. Scream at a broken picture my love. It’ll show hurt more, you see. Walk out on an empty room my love. It’ll call you back before me.

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