As this is my first review and that i've never done it before, as an reader, when i got to the end, totally grabbed my attention. I wouldnt be able to give it the proper 'constructive criticism as far as how it should be presented, but it did give me the impression of 'what happened?' I am dying to know if the neighbour was killed, died of a heart attack, or was arrested or evicted. I had to read it over a few times to figure out what was happening in the early stages, but that ending was the...

I had to read it a few times over to get the full meaning of it, but once i got into it i was totally relating to the situation. i think that was me just waking up, so don't panic about that bit. I am not sure what message you, yourself, as the author, wanted to initially send out, but the message i got from this poem was 'i'm sick of the political correctness and selfishness in this world, all we want is to get on with our lives, help one another, honour God, (Not a one showed their smile wa...