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AGE: 29
LOC: San Pedro, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: April 25

Thank you to all of you on Urbis who have taken the time to help me with my work.

Currently, I plan to put the first 3 chapters of The Blood in the Sand up on Urbis. Regretfully, those of you who enjoy young Malach’s tale will have to await its publication to find out the rest of the story.

However, because I am not a man without pity, I have created a MySpace profile dedicated to the Twinblade Chronicles at www.myspace.com/twinbladechronicles

On this profile and supported down the line by a dedicated website, some pre-publication easter eggs and status updates will be posted. In addition, I hope to get your help in creating a bustling online community who can help via polls/forums/personal messaging bring Malach’s journey from …

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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Advent: Zero
by ZeRo
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Capacitance for Change
by sfharper
The writing is good. I think this should be moved to poetry though. I dont know if I would rely on the word "capacitance". It didnt seem right to me and everytime I came to it I stumbled along the otherwise exceedingly well crafted narrative. Good luck though.
Sci Fi & Fantasy / Ynnok
by sophiebennett
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Spider Web Powder
by JEK
You know, I especially love when I dont expect much from a story and then it totally surprises me with how much I actually enjoy it. That was the case here. This was a very interesting story and I greatly enjoyed it. Your technique seems good in my eyes and I think the actual story itself has a great deal of potential. I would definitely enjoy seeing where your work goes from here. Take care of yourself and good luck with your future work.
Poetry / Lonely and Disgust Fuck
by lovelyrose
I thought this was interesting and with the lee way that is provided in poetry it is arguably passable, however for me personally, I couldnt get past some of the wording. One example being: "A diseased moon's yellow fat sags in vast blue black". While interesting, I cant for the life of me understand why a moon would have fat... unless it's been hitting up McDonalds too much or something. Just smooth out some of the wording a little and you'll be rockin. Oh and your second goal made me laugh....
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