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AGE: 15
LOC: Elk Horn, KY
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: March 12

Hello~
My name is Hannah, or Hana, and I have just graduated from middle school. Or, in other words, I am a freshman/greenie. My hobbies consist of writing and drawing (go figure). And I am currently taking honors english I, and advanced reading classes.

Also, since so many of you have asked me to review your poems; stories: I must admit a few of them are beyond me! I’m not really sure my reviews are worthy of such art.

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Young Adult / Midnight
Version 1
4 Reviews   2 Comments
Her eyes were soft, calm, and kept loosely at half-mast. Cloudy-gray swirled in the mixture, dancing around a small, slanted pupil. A bright and golden pupil. Hana was no human; she was a werewolf. In this world, there are many classes: Leaders, Normals, Loners, Werewolves... It depended on who you started out as, the family you were born into. If raised kindly, and with a maternal, honest compassion, you would become a leader. If raised as an average person, with just enough love, and a spri...
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Version 1
5 Reviews   5 Comments
Small, ebony wings worked furiously against the rushing island winds as the Prince Komali soared gracefully in the cerulean skies. Clenched in his beak was a freshly picked, fuchsia flower; it’s petals glistening brightly. The Prince strained to fight the rushing winds of Dragon Roost Isle as the large chunk of land came into view. A smile played across his face as he heard the first gentle plucking of Medli’s harp. As he neared the island, Medli appeared on the edge of the cliff face; harp i...
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Romance / Komali and Medli
Version 1
4 Reviews   5 Comments
Small, ebony wings worked furiously against the rushing island winds as the one and only Prince Komali soared gracefully in the cerulean skies. Clenched in his beak was a freshly picked, fuchsia flower; it's petals radiating spring beauty. The Prince flapped once again as Dragon Roost Isle came into view. A gentle smile played across his face as he heard the first gentle plucking of Medli's harp. As he neared the island, Medli appeared on the edge of the cliff face; harp in hand, fingers danc...
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Poetry / a dreamsong
This is a lovely piece. The rhyming was perfect, and flowed smoothly. I noticed you didn't capitalize the i's, but I didn't know whether or not it was one purpose. I was almost frustrated with the repitition of the words 'in the purest white', and then at the end you had said 'stained in dark red', which was a great way to end it.
Young Adult / Ghost Girl, Chapter Six
You did a very nice job of plot, you didn't rush and there was plenty of detail. I noticed maybe one or two spelling errors, but besides that your fine there. It was great overall and I will look forward to reading more.
Limericks / On Syllamericks
Lol This is the kind of thing I can go around chanting all day. It's cute and funny. Even though that's probably not what you were going for. I like it though
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Limericks / On Syllamericks
Poetry / a dreamsong

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