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AGE: 25
LOC: Sacramento, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 04

I don’t consider myself a writer. I know that might sound a little odd, considering what kind of site this is, but it’s true. I don’t have the qualifications to give myself this title. What I do have is an imagination and a need to write, which is what I am doing here. That being said, I hope that you enjoy my work. Constructive criticism is welcome…

Again, thank you for your time and consideration… I look forward to hearing from you!

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Version 1
27 Reviews   27 Comments
It seems important to say that this story does not begin in a certain place or time, but within the heart of a girl child. She was raised to believe in her own worthlessness. She had trouble mastering any skill, she was clumsy and she was not particularly attractive in any way. Even though she was aware of these flaws, the people surrounding her made sure to remind her of them every day. Soon she stopped trying to do anything correctly, since nothing of quality was expected of her anyway, an...
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Lyrics / Secret
Version 1
5 Reviews   4 Comments
Darkened vines The twisted limbs Hiding places Secret spaces Touch me where no one can see Promises made Shadowed silence The leafy bower Where every hour Was marked by lustful wanting I can still feel you trace the vein Pulsed in secrecy I cherish half remembered pain I know you want me Kiss me Handsome I can still feel you feeling skin Cloak and dagger Places you have always been And will be again Touch me Handsome Hearts entwined Disheveled beings Pulse and races Darkened faces Me against ...
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Poetry / Cadaver
Version 1
4 Reviews   11 Comments
I am disgusted Ravenous wolves And carrion crows Who wade in their jealousy Fighting over the carcass Of someone near their end. Some disguise their intentions: “I am a helping hand,” Waiting to clean up after The body drops. “I only love you I don’t want you hurt” He’s going to die There is no getting around that At least he won’t be around To witness your free meal.
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Poetry / Are you happy?
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2 Reviews   1 Comment
We’re in danger. So easily we could lose Everything in the stormy nature Of our foe. We mustn’t cast off the cloud But live within it’s chill Adapt to the circumstances But I can’t see you anymore And my heart is breaking For the things that were supposed to be And never were And can’t be anymore Through choice and situation Accidents in the guise of fate Choices made in ignorance Bind us to where we wander slowly I am so lost Are you happy?
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Poetry / Be Lost With Me
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7 Reviews   6 Comments
There’s a woman between us. She doesn’t want you To be drawn into my trap. She knows I am tricky tricky; And she sees you Falling asleep Inside the shelter of my trees Being lost to her forever. Nothing can compare To my ravenous appetite. The world inside my arms Is addictive and hollow Empty spaces for you to shelter; Hidden from her anger. How do you feel About being seduced By my warm hungry mouth? How do you feel About losing yourself In my warm hungry hands? I can feel it in my unrest. ...
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Oooo! I want to know what happens next!! This seems like a very good lead into a more complex story. You have the potential to develop several lays of complex plot here. I have a couple of suggestions: The sentences, “It wasn’t for a lack of trying, it was a lack opportunity. There simply weren’t any positions available for someone who just spent 10 years in the Army teaching explosive ordinance demolition.” Read a little bit awkwardly. If you eliminate, “it was a lack opportunity.” And separ...
I really did like this piece a lot. It felt a tad bit lengthy, but I suppose it was necesary to really tell the story. I liked how in some lines you had double rhyming. Another good piece of work!
I love this poem. It is purely sensous. Good work!
I really liked this piece. In fact, I read it then I went outside for my break (I know... I shouldn't be playing on line when I am supposed to be working!) adn I had the line "3 strikes in a row" stuck in my head which was what inspired me to come back and comment. This was a memorable piece. Thank you.
Short Story / Wildness
This piece had a marvelous level of detail. The writing was descriptive and made me see eveything that you were talking about. The line "the ultimate fulfillment of a human is to have death in his hand and fear in his heart. " defintiely resonated. Keep up the good work!
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