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LOC: Arnold, MD
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Years have consoled My wounds left gaping Though I still wait For my heart to stop aching My hands are still burnt From the rope that has slipped Your life whittled away And the bottle was tipped With each passing day A new story begins Although I wonder When all this horror ends The weight on my shoulders Begins to fold and press Not too much longer now Before it weakens my chest Harder to breathe under the burden The one I reluctantly accept Impossible to care for a family of stone Whose wh...
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The chains were locked The gates were closed A dark cast emerged The seeds were sowed Nothing came from this loss Nurtured and fed the disease No beauty bloomed from the depths Of loneliness and greed I walked beside myself this time As thought I lived in a dream Because no matter how deep I inhaled No others heard me scream Inside my head I knew it was best Though my heart heavily bled the loss I feared the light and dread the dark Pleaded the pain would stop And then came inspiration Emerge...
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Moonlight The ocean whispered all their names Every night of deception you had An empty bottle floated atop the waves Reflecting in eyes so sad Time has passed coldly My heart left alone to freeze And now I feel the sting of pain Carried along this stormy breeze Truth always surfaces From a sea of bottomless lies A second’s glance confirms it Can’t conceal your lying eyes The length of hardships endured Walked alongside you each time Speechless from your deceit Blinded by the tears I cry I to...
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You ripped away from my grasp What I held so tightly to I needed someone to help me up Instead, I met someone like you Your hands spoiled all my riches As your words wore away my skin Your actions favored only yourself You just pulled me down again Left fluttering inside this jar The one you confined me to I can feel the oxygen depleting As my face changes shades of blue But you only sit and wonder About how much time it should take Until my lively wings should sputter And I am taken from thi...
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I take a step away from myself To contemplate the mess before me The edges of my heart have become serrated That which persists will openly bleed I am fully glutting my vengeance I will hurt no more Rage has festered in all corners of my mind I thrust the glass angel onto the floor Heavenly guidance is mere coincidence No beings are here to help me prevail Those who place closure around me Suffocate my motives to never fail A halo worn upon the heads of a few Marks artificial hope in my eyes ...
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Such beauty flows from your fingertips! What a delight to read! "I am thrilled in her touch, Her passion, her need matches my own..." To me, this shows readers the eternity of the two characters which you write about. It flows nicely from beginning to end and I love how you have incorporated a child into the "temptation." Well done.
I grew up with a single dad after my mother passed and I can completely relate every single word in this poem to him. Hiding the pain, being scarred, finding the only comfort in your children. This poem is so true and I commend you to have such a strong heart for your mother to write this. This is a special poem and I felt like you had written it about my life almost. I liked it very much.
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I could feel the anguish when I read this, very dear to my heart. The part in which you said "Once God decided, The day she was taken, The day the vultures came" brought such pain and sadness to the poem. I think the use of a vulture was good because we only associate those birds with death. I liked it.
What can I say other than I LOVED IT! I'm a hopeless romantic at heart and your words here are so beautiful. I couldn't stop reading it and I sighed when it ended!! Your use of Indian tribes and raging battles against them plays into our current times: Times of war between various nationalities, the loss of innocence, and unheard cries for peace. I commend your writing. Very well done. Please write more!
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