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AGE: 52
LOC: Richmond, VA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: June 03

I am Sensuality and poetry is what I write.  I write it because I feel it and make no apologies for it.  What a wonderful way to express yourself.  Words that dance, have textures and colors and some words you can even taste.

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Short Story / THE DOWNLOAD
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I Sitting at home thinking about last night And how he loved me down. Oh.. he had a sista hollering up in here All I could do was smile. You see that man loves me right and with every inch of his soul. Mind wandering, eyes roaming around the room I see unopened mail Shaking the images of us intertwined I search through each envelope and happen upon a small package. I picked up his scent Mmmm Hugo Boss, my favorite. Slowly opening this surprise. I reached in and pulled out a black disk in what...
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SENSUALITY: I look at you and love what you have become. You are a young man with principle and respect my beautiful son Yeah, there has been times when upside your head I would go. It was just my way of saying "baby slow your roll" Don't grow too fast, the world is a vast place with much to digest. Always do what’s right and nevermind the rest. That is the advice I have always given you to prepare you when you move on. So let's consider this collaboration a Mother and Son’s Love Song. SENSU...
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MY DATE I step into the shower I have my usual date I am time conscious You see, he is never late I never disappoint him He is always pleased Been that way for months since the apartment across the court yard he leased With his window facing mine That’s when we began this game It's always at night, the time is always the same Getting out of the shower no need to dry off he likes watching me do that He imagines my skin so soft I walk to the bedroom my blinds slightly apart I look across and th...
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I realize that writing a story that captures the reader is not a easy thing to do. I my opinion, you have done that with ease. I find it hard to critique another writer because styles are so different. I however have to say that your story held my interest straight through. Your characters were alive to me
Haiku/Senryu / Two Acrostiku
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Poetry / ramblings
This was indeed a powerful read. Definitely publishable!
Poetry / Had Enough?
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Poetry / a dreamsong
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