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AGE: 24
LOC: Brandon, FL
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: February 10

I am inspired by poetry. It awakens my soul, flicks on all my internal switches. I live in an imaginary world inside my head, each day I can change my world, shape it into what I want it to be. I have learned a lot about the world in my mere 23 years, and I don’t wish to be a part of it anymore. Most of what I post is poetry, I wish to compose a book of journal entries with poetry stuck in.

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Poetry / Paper Petals
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She mimics her mother, mother passes a grin Move it, leave it or throw it in the bin Her mother’s paper, her paper though invisible it’s twin Keep cards from Gramma, Aunties and kin Letters from strangers, we need not relive Mother moves quickly like shaking a sieve Sorting the cards, letters, pictures and lists Little girl’s eyes are suddenly lit Mother, my mother what is this? Looks like a flower, but its paper thin   “How do round flowers end up this way?&rdquo...
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Poetry / Taste my Secret
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Teacher teach me something new I care not, why the sky is blue Chasten me when I am bad Your discipline stick drives me mad I will worship your legs and feet Just to taste your hidden treat Finger tips glide up my thigh Neath my skirt and inside me glide Jump on your lap and stare in your eyes I can feel your pulsing surprise If I am a good girl you will taste my secret Sucking, licking, moaning, consuming it Teacher it may hurt right now But, I know you will wipe the tears away You will hold...
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Poetry / Sensory Seizure
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Open your eyes Blink blink Go to the Kitchen Drink drink Pop of the Toaster Eat eat People people all around I crave your scent I need your sound Touch my skin and talk to me Is this the way I am meant to be Sunlight sunlight on my face Windblown hair or skies of grey Tell me why I crave the rain?
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When crying isn't enough I weep When silence just creeps up I speak Up, down and all around Me Floating in your pretty boat With glee Let's make this easy Invisibility The beauty of my shell Frailty An abstract actuality Fleeting
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Poetry / Lost in Lunacy
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Mad love burns the sad song I sing Acid teardrops sting Blinded by you Bittersweet skin My sacred sin Taste my secret Under your spell I am not well Lost in Lunacy.
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Poetry / Poetry***
I think this is a poem that is better when you read it aloud! Maybe this will help with some of the lines...
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Poetry / Damask Rose
I love your metaphors and imagery here, the last two lines are my favorite, both eery and beautiful at the same time... Great job!
Favorite: "My poor soul is a kin to the ice that has crystallized on the trees--- a land of glass, shimmering in the dark." I really enjoyed reading this, it is one of those poems that is actually telling a story. I think this could be part of a series. It is fascinating, eery and yet beautiful! I wonder if you have thought of making a series if so this should be part of it!
Poetry / Theosophy
Great imagery, very deep rooted and of course philosophical, don't stop writing :)
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