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AGE: 21
LOC: Baden, PA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 14

I am an aspiring writer of a few things, I appreciate the darker side of life. The violence, the chaos, the mayhem. But the lighter side of things have a certain finesse that just seems to reach out and smack me across the face. I am not normal by any standard but at least it makes my stories interesting to delve into… hehe My friends call me Shadow but my real name is Timothy, or Allen if you don’t mind. I need more material to read so don’t hesitate to send a review request on ANYTHING you may to post.

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8 Reviews   8 Comments
Screaming in Pain or Terror or Mix of both Eyes closed to Horror and open the most In my sleep I am awake in my wake I am asleep These visions blind these scenes must go Bloodshed filled and murderous Nightmares Plagued I've been longer than I'd care Take me eyes take my arms take my body as a whole But leave my mind, leave my heart, and leave my soul Forever now and forever then in my sleep I scream my Worst In my wake I only find that they were dreams fearing that unfortunate time when slee...
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Poetry / Forever Alone
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7 Reviews   7 Comments
   I stand here all alone, with no one to be known, but myself, my sec;lusion, isolation; my forever kept frustration, binding me. When I look into my shattered mirror I see that I am inferior. All my friends have run along as I sing you this sad song of society.    They do not include me now and it makes me wonder how I'm still alive. Forever I long to be accepted but forever now I've been rejected. I've been thrown to the side to no one I can con...
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Philosophy
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10 Reviews   8 Comments
    Everyday someone is claiming that they know how to fix the worlds problems and create answers to the public's growing number of questions. Now if someone REALLY had all of the answers you would think that we wouldn't have any problems, right? You see my belief is that no matter how smart you are, or how powerful you are, you never know everything. There will always be something that escapes your mental grasp, something that just doesn't fit with the rest of your knowle...
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Poetry / Gemini
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Gemini The Dark and The Light. One has Logic one has Might. In the Sun one form, in the Moon reborn. The Twins contained in a single body, one stays the midnight, the other is Naughty. The Dark and the Light, the Sun and the Moon. The brawn and the brain will always walk as the other's cane. When we look around and take what we see, we divide and conquer so unnaturally. Too much brawn or too much brain, the imbalance makes us Insane. One half is simple, the other complex. ...
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Claire and Kyrie’s Tale This is the tale of two friends Claire LeMatre and Kyrie Valkanas. They have been friends for five long years; within which they have bonded like that of siblings. Kyrie discovered Claire in a ditch when she was the age of fifteen. Claire had a pair of abyssal void black wings, protruding from her back, spread to full wing span at least twelve feet. She was lying in a ditch unconscious, barely breathing, muttering something about not wanting to be dispelled into ...
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The way this is written is sweet Tom just seems to blend, fast talk, and kick ass now thats the making of a sweet movie... keep it going i want to read more of this ass kicking Tom. You may want to try and reformat how it shows up here though it made it a little hard to follow.
Sci Fi & Fantasy / Where Wolf-Ch2 w/recap
Very interesting take on the werewolf v. human plot... if i had not read the recap i may have thought i missed something but this is definitely a most interesting piece with many twists and turns, tons of confliction and many unigue personalities... simply magnificent.
Young Adult / Silenced- Chapter Two
This is a very powerful piece, it is almost like I am Casey watching these events pass by. There is nothing I would add to it, this part is just fine as is and I have never read a more potent piece of a teenage darkness. Bravo
The pain in losing someone is ever so evident in this piece. It makes my own heart thaw from its usual cold frozen depths to appreciate what I have now and not what coulkd be... I love this piece and believe it should be shared with the world... On a more literary note the lines seem a little mixed up on the breaks and the rythym doesnt really flow the whole waay through.
Very nice I must say it is a touching sentimental piece full of love and adoration it flows well. I truly revel in its powerful words.