This is interesting and true. The first line was a bit confusing at first -- thought it should be "Our past is written in the present," but it works both ways.

This exhbits some talent, but did you write it? It reads like a song and I feel like I've heard it somewhere.

I was pulled into this story quickly and hooked. However, it ended rather abruptly. It wasn't clear who saying "Greetings, Gossamer..." at the end? Was it PAM or the humanoids with sunken eyes? If it was the humanoids, why did he die if they were seemingly friendly? Who killed him? I hope you clarify this in comments as I'm really interested to know (as a reader).

Man, this is a great read but also pisses me off. Option 1 is good, but if it doesn't work I wouldn't completely dismiss option 3. There is also a 4th option: vigilante justice, but that could prove more dangerous. Don't let this dip shit get you down. Stay true to your beliefs on this and stay on top of your friends - if they're smart, they'll see what he's doing.

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Ha. Assuming the egg was eaten, that was very funny.

Ha! Sorry you lost your mojo, but that was quite funny.

This is interesting - I'm just not sure how it is a memoir.