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AGE:
35
LOC: Waterville, ME
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 21
LOC: Waterville, ME
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 21
I’m just a guy who likes to write. I hope to have a book published someday.
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It was a cool, rainy day in the Village, and not too many people were about. The past two weeks had been filled with non-stop rain, and it did not look good for it stopping anytime soon. A young man sat on an old swing hanging from a tree. He had sat there many times before in his life, usually when he was feeling down. Today was no exception. The rain coming down plastered his blond hair to his head, and soaked him to the bone. He barely noticed the chill, though his body noticed, sending s...
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It was a cool, rainy day in the Village, and not too many people were about. The past two weeks had been filled with non-stop rain, and it did not look good for it stopping anytime soon. A young man sat on an old swing hanging from a tree. He had sat there many times before in his life, usually when he was feeling down. Today was no exception. The rain coming down plastered his blond hair to his head, and soaked him to the bone. He barely noticed the chill, though his body noticed, sending s...
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This a very interesting story. I am now curious as to how it will develop. You have a good ability for drawing the reader in. I would have liked the first part of the story to have been developed more, but the secong half is simply outstanding. I am left wondering how the two halfs tie together.
The Author of this piece shows excellent skill in writting, though his story does seem a bit wordy at times. I cannot help but think of this as having a style similar to "The Hobbit", only with a Japanese twist. I wish that the story could have had more to it, not that it was lacking, just that I would have had more to read. I would enjoy more of his writings.
This is a beautiful poem. You have great prose and a sence of being there. I felt is if the experience was meant for me when I read it. Thank you for the enjoyable experience.
Thank you with all of my heart for your beautiful words. I have no clue as how to tell you how much your poetry means to me.
This was a wonderful little poem. Your style flows and comes through right to the heart. My hat is off to you. please continue blessing us with your wonderful imagination and skill.
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