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I think I'd like it better, "Trapped inside my head - can't escape!" I don't really like the "(comma)trapped(comma)" in such a short quote. Just my opinion. Good luck with it.

List this under CRITICISM maybe... I know exactly what ou're tlking about. When I was younger I used to do that with the lids, but as I got older I kind of grew out of it. I think that for most, by the time you reach 35 you're done with it.

I read your first paragraph and there is not one single thing mentioned about word-count, the title of your work, the genre it is or anything about you. It's very vague and obvious and you're just wasting your precious character-count on something the reader already knows. Halfway through your letter I'm unsure as to whether this is fiction or written about something and someone you know of. "In the end, Colby will take his first life," Does this imply that he takes another life after he gets...

Your first sentence starting with "May I introduce..." is a question and should be followed by a question mark. I have to say, I'm not fond of asking this question as an opening line because whether they want to be introduced or not, you go ahead and introduce it in the next line. Why ask the question at all? I'd consider cutting that question out. The next paragraph starting with "Here is a short synopsis..." I'd delete that sentence as well. "murder, at the home of Squire Peter Cosford, cre...

What that tells me is that you've been drawing shapes (or images) that you conjure up in your mind. I assume from this quote that you are not normally sketching or drawing pots, vases and fruit, but more of what you see in your own mind; your interpretation of settings, flowers or maybe even monsters - unique. It's interesting and is a good choice of six words.