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AGE:
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LOC: Enterprise, AL
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 27
LOC: Enterprise, AL
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 27
hey everyone.
well I rarely get on here so if you want to know me, just message me and I’ll get back when I can.
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Susan’s heels clicked loudly on the tile floor of the hallway, dimly lit from only every other rectangular light in the high ceiling. She almost dropped the large calculus book in her hands, but recovered in time to save it from crashing to the ground. The hallway was empty of any university students and dead silent. That was definitely an advantage to her. The time was way past lights out in the campus and the last thing she needed before returning to Brian’s dorm was someone running off to ...
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The man was one of many but considered to be only one of a few. He was a simple man with a complex life. He was a sniper. It was his job, his duty, to keep himself steady in the most dangerous and ruthless conditions. He gripped the ridged handle of the rifle and placed the butt into his shoulder, taking care that the framework became a third arm to him, held and supported by his other two. He did this with the consistency and smoothness of a man who had done so many times before. He had deli...
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Wow. I thought it was absolutely excellent. I love (that's kind of a weird word, keeping in mind the story) the way the violence and hatred was portrayed. It was, however, a bit confusing in the beginning for me. But maybe becuase my mind didn't pick up some details. Either way, excellent.
Pretty good. It was quite inspiring and certainly makes someone want to never quit.
This is pretty good, Jeff. You have a great way of portraying the mental stuff people go through. However, it did seem to get a bit confusing for me, personally. I suggest being wide awake while reading this, because it is so deep and uses big words >.< You have talent for this and I can't wait to read the rest.
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