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AGE: 20
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 06

My name is Nicola J Steel. I’m 19 year old and from Sheffield (Yorkshire), England.
I’ve been writing for 4 years. I write poetry mainly, however, I’ve just started working on my first story which I’m hoping to expand into a novel.
I work full time in fashion retail as well as studying English Language and Literature part time.
In my spare time, away from poetry, I enjoy spending time with my boyfriend, Ben.

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Quotes / Read the Words
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2 Reviews   0 Comments
Sometimes it's important to read the words, instead of what sits between them, and sometimes it's better to notice what's concrete, before your own reflection.
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Quotes / Read the Words
Version 1
5 Reviews   6 Comments
Sometimes it's important to read the words, instead of what sits between them, and sometimes it's better to notice the concrete, before your own reflection.
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Poetry / Words
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They landed with a thump, and seemed to writhe around for some prolonged seconds on the dull, harsh concrete. Until you saved them. Until, you cupped them in your rough pink hands, brushed the loose specks of dirt from their candid skin and held them close. You pronounced their every corner and crevice; ran your index along the texture of them, puzzled their meaning carefully, and pondered still as my breath quivered. The lump in my throat; the aviary in my stomach; the springs in my fingers,...
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Poetry / Widow
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It started from my nape, dispersed along my shoulders, and sidled down my arms and back in a synchronised scurry. My eyes were fixed open; my fingers still thorny, and I saw her kiss him. My dim pupils cast the widow spiders at his offence, and she felt the icy feet on her lips, then tasted the mangled blood drenching his sallow tongue. My pummelled stomach joined my numb regard for life and morality, and they lived ever after.
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Quotes / Turquoise
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8 Reviews   1 Comment
He knew it was blue; she knew it was green; and it was never turquoise.
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Poetry / A Feeble Attempt
The ending to this is very stong. The last line is very final and stays with you way after you've finished reading, "It never reached your eyes." This is what you expect from a good poem. However, the beginning doesn't hold the same substance. The first line indicates there has been some event to cause the "silence." I can't help feeling though, there should be another line or so laying down the groundwork about how, why, what, etc is responsible for this. All I'm trying to say is with such a...
Poetry / Go, Figure!
I know how hard it is to break out of writers block, so, well done for your start out. The poem starts with the image of an "ugly hidden face" or hidden quality to this person. That was an intriguing idea, but the whole concept of this seemed to fizzle out around the sixth line. Maybe a further reference to this later in the poem would help to hold the poem together. The ending is quite musical and mystical in language, "melody," "fantasy," "ecstasy." This doesn't seem to link in with the ton...
Poetry / My Grandmother
That is a very sad poem and I'm sure it's something everyone can relate to in some way. I lost my grandma in October so I guess I know how you feel. I could really feel the emotion and sincerety through out the poem and I can really tell you wrote this from your heart. If you don't mind I just have a couple of suggestions about this poem in a gramatical sense. Maybe it would sound easier if at the end of the first stanza the line said "good friends we were." Also, on the first line of the fou...
Poetry / modernism
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Ok! I'm trying really hard to think of a word that isn't swearing... I loved the quote by the way! I'm still thinking about it, and I probably will be for the rest of the day. That is everything that a quote should be. Well done!