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AGE:
34
LOC: Alexandria, VA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 22
LOC: Alexandria, VA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 22
Dart-throwing, car-loving, beer-drinking, chocolate-eating, soul-searching, roller-skating, ex-pat Brit.
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Catharsis sought and achieved through mimesis
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There once was a cute girl called Jess she liked me but I didn't guess she 'fessed up one day and I said, wahey! while she quickly took off her dress
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There once was a girl from Warrenton that guys young and old were all wantin' after she made her choice based in part on his voice he spoiled it with his jealous ranting
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10 Reviews
6 Comments
Making love with you is a physical expression of our emotional connection.
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7 Reviews
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There once was a girl from Manassas who met a limey with an accent and glasses she thought out her plan to snare her this man with her jeans and the tightest of asses
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I like it. Really made me think. Applies to anyone that has to understand the person they're writing about, whether it be fiction, a biography, or a poem.
I like the concept of outing yourself as being something other than what you've portrayed. I don't like the way this is structured, although the redundancy in L2 does make it stand out. L3 could be much richer by avoiding the single-syllable words.
I really like this piece, but find it a stretch to say this is a memoir about the life of a writer. Yes, it's about you, a writer, but it would still be about you if you weren't a writer. Unless you're suggesting that you're single because you're a writer...
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