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AGE: 23
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 16

I havent been on here submitting work in quite a long time. I haven’t stopped writing, just haven’t been around these parts lol.

My profile was woefully out of date so for now this will have to do.

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Poetry / The Cycle
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New kids recite their ryhmes like veterans, bringing a new style and flow, a different kind of medicine, people at the top take notice and start paying attention, some will fight the new blood, try and protect their position, but it's all part of the fun, part of the tradition. Proteges shed their L plates, and become pioneers in their own way, some will be remembered, some will end up eating dust on the highway. We all take our seperate paths, and proceed to take the smooth with the rou...
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Poetry / Searching
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searching for meaning, can lead you down dark paths, where you question who you really are. Have you really changed that much from the start? The kinda questions that can give you a heavy heart. Analysing your self, means spending your intellectual wealth, but not to comment on someone else, but the man in the mirror, a sure fire way to be in emotional debt, when you realise you haven't achieved anything yet. Ambition is like a mill stone around my neck, it's a fine line between dreams a...
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Non-fiction / School days.
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The chair crashed into me, shocking me out of talking with the guest speaker. I turned around to see Gary looking angry as hell, then pissing himself laughing. My form tutor Mr Yeoman, already at the end of his tether seeing another class go up in smoke, runs into the middle row of the class, directly between me and Gary. “Hassan, don’t you dare retaliate.” I already had a chair in my hand to throw back. “Alright sir, I wont, but he better be in trouble” Yeoman didn’t answer, he made his way ...
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Quotes / everyday
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Everyday is the same. Its what you do with it that makes the difference
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Quotes / words
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I know so many words, I just dont know what to say.
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Flash Fiction / Paradise Lost
I know your gonna think it unfair of me not to have read the whole piece but I do have my reasons. I thought the first page was bloody brilliant to be honest and was really looking forward to the rest but then it just seemed to descend into over descriptive 'woe is me' passages that just became to much to wade through. when you keep it simple, concise and to the point you really do seem like an accompolished writer it's just the other times that make it difficult to keep with it.
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Journalism / "Stamp It Out"
I can find no big problem with this piece, it already looks like it'd sit side by side with other articles in a paper right now. Is that good enough to mark you out from the crowd I don't know but it's clear and concise so your on the right track if journalism is your thing. the only minor quibble "these poofs are no wimps", this one line doesn't seem to fit with the overall tone of your writing. If that's the tone your going for there needs to be more of it because I did think it was going t...
Screenplay / Poptarts & Bondage
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