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LOC: South Bend, IN
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: June 23
LOC: South Bend, IN
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: June 23
Hiya. I’m Julie, and I’m 18 soon to be 19. Uh..I hate writing these little bio things because I never have anything to say. Other people put these monumental things in and I just wind up putting in lame tidbits about myself. So now, here come the lame tidbits. Stay with me here, people.
I love to write (duh, I wouldn’t be on here otherwise). I’d love to write professionally but I don’t know if people would dig my writing enough to buy it.
I’m pretty aloof most of the time but don’t confuse that with me being snobby.
~I’m really bad at writing comedy. It just doesn’t work for me. I’d like to think that I’m funny in real life and I laugh constantly but, it’s just difficult to write anything worth laughing at. So, if there are …
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In class we were asked to write about an event in our lives that affected us greatly. I could write about many things. Family members dieing, historical tragedies, personal demons, but I chose something a little different. It all started years ago. I was eight, my sister was eleven. She told me about this great movie that she had seen the night before. “It was so crazy, Julie. It’s about people coming back from the dead and hunting people down and eating them. Oh, it was insane.” She seemed ...
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"You can't choose your family, but you can sure as Hell avoid them."
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Mirror mirror on the wall Says that I’m the fairest one of all. My teeth are diamonds Waiting to be mined. My skin so bronzed, I’d make a beautiful back seat. My flaxen locks rival any rope Used in gym class. If you look deep enough into My sapphire eyes, You can see through to The back of my head. Put your ear next to mine, Can you hear the ocean?
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Edie Chapter One I’m in my bedroom. Sitting on my bed, letting my music wash over me. Maybe, If I sit real still, it’ll take me out to sea somewhere, far from here. This song has been playing for forty-five minutes. If I keep listening any longer, I think the record might warp. Great, my mom’s at the door. “What do you want?” She stares at me, searching my face, my eyes for any sort of emotion. “Are you going to school today? I think you should. You don’t want to miss anymore days of school,...
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Untitled Part One Mr. Barks just called and said he needs to see me in his office. He never calls me into his office. Jesus, please don’t let him fire me. I don’t think I could handle that. I might just swallow a thousand pills and wash it down with liquid drainer. I need this job. I have tons of bills to pay off, not to mention my student loans. I have pets to look after. And I’ve come to love my little desk. It’s smaller than everyone else’s, but I don’t mind. It has carvings from the prev...
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I enjoyed this, but I think it sort of drags after a while. You could cut out a few lines, and you would still get the same thing. I do love that last bit. Very powerful.
This is okay. You could try using more descrpitive language. My only real problem is that this feels a little repetive. Try and change things up a bit. Good job!
This is a good piece, but it could be better if it had more to grab onto. I get what you're saying but, you're just kind of repeating it. Add more in the middle. This actually seems, not quite like poetry, almost like a journal entry. It doesn't flow like poetry, but I think it could. Keep trying.
There are a few minor mistakes in this piece. This one stuck out. "and I don’t have never seen" It's small, so no big deal. Just spice it up a little bit more. You have a very good point. I agree with everything you wrote. If you would clean up the tiny grammar mistakes, then yes I would read your column.
I liked this. The only 'bad' thing I have to say is that I wish there was a bit more imagery, but other than that I liked it! "an airless cocoon in the heat of noon." That's the best line, in my opinion.
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