Interesting piece and concept. It was very well written but I got confused at first because I think you trying to get the meaning that with the Husband, a new world is made...but when I read it, it almost sounded like you were talking of a family member. I don't know, the understanding of the poem was just confusing.

I really liked this piece of literature. There was so much emotion and your diction use was superb. Well done, and keep writing.

It is a very well written piece of literature. The diction and sentence fluency blew my mind. The ending didn't really phase me as the rest of the document had before. Although it is well written, the ending can turn the reader's interest off.

I'm almost at loss for words. This poem is like a random ramble of someone trying to put thoughts together and to try to say something, anything.

Very, very, very well written. Your diction and tone of voice blew my mind. This is going to be another favorite poem of mine. Keep writing.

It's good but kind of complicated. I think most readers and reviewers would not be able to comprehend the meaning.

Nice, I like this very much.

This has to be the worst piece of literature I have ever read. I have never been so displeased with any type of writing in my life.

This piece is very well written. It's almost better as a story then a poem. But that is just my opinion. The diction choices are very well placed and flow very well. The title caught me off guard but the poem pulls it together nicely. Very well done. Keep writing.