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AGE: 20
LOC: Spring Hill, FL
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: February 10

I have an angel on my shoulder and a penny in my pocket.

Dear fellow writers, I’ve been in another country w/o internet access. I am now back and writing a story to put here. I am sorry I have been gone so long and will do reviewing right after midterms the fist 2 weeks of Sept. Thank youand sorry to seem to have deserted the gang. Springer

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Haiku/Senryu / Summer's Quick Climb
Version 1
17 Reviews   5 Comments
thick canopies, ferns, August's mundane crickets seem their sturdiest green tart red berries then watered down with black ripen. No face makes sour shapes. babies are quite used to hums of outboards bringing in seared fishermen Birds first to know life is returning to pockets in heavy backpacks. baby animals leave mother ones all alone humans don't know who's old. Dandelions see their spiderweb hats fall up and soar long shadows.
Version 1
28 Reviews   16 Comments
O, sing in me muse! let my thoughts graze the sky, grow wings and soar free o'er landscapes of the mind. Sing me into darkness or give light to my words; while I 'wait you in agony bring a cure for this curse. For swallowed by doubt the verse goes unpenned and these short-lived creations spill on without end. For deep in these fantasies dwell magics unspoken, dead rhymes on stone tongues of the myths not yet woken. The ancient ones hide here: myths, peoples, the lorn, those closest to heaven...
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Haiku/Senryu / Cyber Dear John
Excellant way to look at an end and go on , over it already." Delete". Great advice and I'm taking it!
Humor/Satire / Cursing Problem
This whole piece is wonderful, well-written (exception, the run -on words "pubescencewith"). I just wrote a slim book about my dad and yours shows me our dads were polar opposites. I'd like to see 10 kinds of dads but think there are only 2 or 3... Was so glad to see you go deep for the characterizations, and nail your dad so well. I really enjoyed how you laid your whole family out. ("To complicate the relationship, in 1969, the year I was born, Dad dropped out, ENLISTED in the Marines to r...
Flash Fiction / WORDS WHAT I WROTE (1/2)
I like cuz different but as you know , no punctuation gets tiring quickly and I think you have a good, no, a superb piece without the second page added at all. "Do things in me pants that is unpleasant" is the part where I was about to skip it (til I saw that). That was good. Clackclack wires made me refrain from saying napalm is not a descriptive word. I caught your germ then. You have great imagination and individuality--but I hope all your works aren't so run-on; here alone it is humorous....
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Flash Fiction / One Sided Conversation
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Bad Luck
Humor/Satire / Cursing Problem

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