I'm not much for poetry, but this by far, the best I have ever read. This poem is very detailed and even discribes a few men I know. This shows that as a writer you have great talent, especially when it comes to discription, this poem is bold and vivid on many levels. I love your work here and hope to read more of your poems/stories in the future. Keep up the awesome work you're doing. You have talent that should not be wasted.

This is a memoir that could fit just about any book or poem set to be published. In just six words you've prety much sumed up the world and everyone in it.

Wow! That says alot about life, doesn't it?

A very beautiful and discriptive poem, there was alot of thought put into this poem and the detail is wonderful. I loved it.

A lot of thought was put into this poem. I enjoyed it and this is coming from someone that's not much a of a poem fan. Keep up the good work, I like the way you use your discription it's a very vivid poem. I can see everything discribed in it.