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LOC: Prescott Valley, AZ
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LAST LOGIN: April 07
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GEN: Female
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The green in your treeness Sprouted this spring Returned from a winter Of dark reckoning. Solitude slumbered 'Neath a blanket of snow Acorn intentions Dreaming their grow. Then to a leaf Yet dazzling, new Breathing in sunshine Kissed by the dew. Your mighty arms branch out A summer for shade; Your weathered trunk solid With wisdom and age. Turn 'round once again In this autumn of gold Warm amber brilliance But never to hold A moment of beauty Leaf's tender release As days dwindle shortly And ...
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Thank you for your worship When I was blind To my own Light. Thank you for your touch When I needed your skin To feel Alive. Thank you for your absence When I needed darkness For your seed to germinate. Thank you for your shelter As I sought safety To Trust. Thank you for your howling winds As I fill my lungs And learn to Fly. Thank you for my World The Reflection Of our Love. Thank you for letting me Choose You As I took my first breath And You became my Husband.
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Angry words Carelessly cast from bitter lips Slamming door Smoldering silence. Quiet tears Words unspoken, unheard. Invisible child Floating in the corner of the room Where she hides. She has her father's voice His features His mind His humor; But she cooks like her mother, Creating a banquet From the nothing In the kitchen.
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The structure is very clever! I got the feeling of watching a video played backwards. Your use of rhyme and metor invoked a very somber, sad, wistful mood, and I liked the upside down feel portrayed, as the subject must feel going through the events of the write. Very good job!
I read this several times. Great descriptives capture the moment/feeling of the write. Could be taken a number of ways, which I really enjoy. Good work!
I'm sure Eliot would be very happy with this tribute. Not completely familiar w/ his work, but I think the repeated lines are part? My favorite line: "For no one listened to them like you," how he was able to make the simple sublime with the stroke of a pen...very good!
My only suggestion would be an additional description on the "blue" theme; loved the "cobalt captiviy"; perhaps near "clear eyed vision", and also maybe in the last sentence. Overall, very good!
I adored this write. It speaks to me of the author's writer soul and the distinct and strange meetings of other cyber writers. You should meet my buddy Tao_Jones (on this site) :)
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