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Christian had to give it to Aunt Lyn. She was trying damn hard to make this a good Christmas for her and her brother. Liam was only three, so she didn’t have to try too hard with him. Some gingerbread men and the anticipation of Santa’s arrival was enough to keep his young mind occupied for the night. It was enough to make him forget that his parents were dead, and this would be his first Christmas, and the start of the rest of his life, without them. Lyn wouldn’t have such ...
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2|SCARLETT I was different. No matter where I was, no matter where I went, I just didn’t fit in. Not even in the comfort of my own home. Especially not in the comfort of my own home. That morning began like most others. I awoke with a start, damp with perspiration, a sharp pain pulsating through my temples. Abel kneeled at my bedside holding a glass of water and two small, white pills. I grabbed the water and gulped it down without a pause, quenching the burn in my throat. When ...
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When the bell rang for first period, I followed the rush of students out into the hall. “So what’s your first class?” Will asked. I grabbed my schedule from my pocket and scanned it. “Ah, first period…World History with F. Fitzgerald.” “Hey, I have that, too! C’mon, I’ll show you where his room is.” Jeremy babbled on about who-knows-what as we walked to fist period. I couldn’t concentrate on a word he was ...
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I slowly descended the narrow stairs of the tiny two-bedroom apartment my brother and I shared. It was a drab morning, cloudy, cold, wet, and my first day at Cedar High School. I was dead tired and my entire body ached from the long night Riley and I had before. So far, the school year wasn’t starting out so hot, and I could only hope that morning wasn’t of omen of things to come. “Good morning, Sunshine,” Riley said. He was wide awake, already dressed and halfway thr...
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I turned and ran right into a broad, solid chest. Panic hit me in the gut like a wrecking ball and I nearly screamed before realizing who it was. “Brevan!” I cried, gripping my chest. “You scared me! What are you doing here?” “I told you I’d be back.” “I didn’t think you’d…How did you even get in?” “Your window.” My eyes widened. “You climbed three stories?” A sm...
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I love the way you describe Karim. Very smooth, about his business, good at what he does. I imagine he's good looking. I love the intense look he always has. Very, very good descriptions. The more i'm reading, the more i'm seeing that you really don't need to elaborate on her interest in literature. You give enough hints, such as her not wanting to go without her books for 6 months and the way she always quotes her favorite authors. No further explanation of her passion is needed. Yes, the it...
Love the transition from David to the man in the grey suit. I like the way you compared their intense features. Nice touch. The background information on Angel is a little too much. I would suggest breaking it up a little more throughout future chapters, but the her back story pulls my attention away from the story at hand. Very VERY nice description of the man in the grey suit. I can visualize him perfectly. Ruth Anne sounds like a character. I like your descriptions of her. She and Angel se...
WOW. i absolutely LOVED it. I cannot wait to go back and read the rest. I loved the way you portrayed Karim's intense passion for Angel. It really made me WANT her to give into him. But then again, i really like that she didn't and he just took it as a challenge. I can't wait to read more and see how that pans out. I haven't read the previous chapters (which i plan on doing ASAP) but you really made this a clear read. It all made sense, despite the fact that this is the first chapter i'm read...
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