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AGE: 26
LOC: Australia
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 13

Hey this site seems kool. :) basically im 24 i write a little bit of poetry.  I also like drawing and combining poems with abstract tirbal pencil characters and making up songs that dont make ‘heaps’ of sense but the words melt around each other.  I havent had much formal writing experience and i prefer poetry that no so much rhymes but rolls with its own rythym, shakin itself up a bit is good.  thinkin bout gettin into futuristic graphic novel type stuff and/or eventually writing/ drawing a book with the poems from my diary.  Most of the stuff i write was written on the road, i went on a 2 year bender after my girl of 3 years left and my dog died, i love drinkin an smokin an bein with friends, and the best thing in life is self worth. :...

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Version 1
10 Reviews   7 Comments
I want to be the water in your shower, To be the bee in your silky scented flower. I want to get lost in your gorgeous gold streaked hair While sleeping next to you and your honey coffee skin, To kiss you goodnight on the side of your neck, and wake up with your smile, And your bright eyes ask me.... Before your sweet words.... So what are we doing today?
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Version 2
6 Reviews   4 Comments
Every day and every night People do things out of sight Every window and every door Some are rich but most are poor I want to see every room and find every face This world is an impossibly multiplied place There’s no way to sponge this all in one life time Millions of men can not find their right wife bind Cest la vie, for you and me It’s a big tall tree Chopped at the knee Some thoughts are caged and some become free All you can do in this life… Is be.
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Version 1
9 Reviews   8 Comments
I’m standing here alone In a dark and empty space Waiting for my future To ignite a smile on my face. At least we were together For a while Flying through the sky. Why can’t my heart Let memories stay in my head And be content with times gone by. I walk in this dark, And get nowhere. I run in this dark, And get nowhere. I wish there was some sunshine somewhere Somewhere that I was or was going. When I scream there is no sound seconds later When I hit my head it doesn’t hurt minutes later When...
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Version 1
1 Review   0 Comments
Every day and every night People do things out of sight Every window and every door Some are rich but most are poor I want to see every room and find every place This world is an impossibly multiplied place There’s no way to sponge this all in one life time Millions of men can not find their right wife bind Cest la vie, for you and me It’s a big tall tree Chopped at the knee Some thoughts are caged and some become free All you can do in this life… Is be.
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Version 1
6 Reviews   5 Comments
To my left a river I will never swim Clouds racing past on their flight whirlwind Apartments I will never own to my right Owned by girls I would never hold In the night All I can do is walk and watch them walk past As my memories of you constantly everlast How explodingly lucky I could have been Had I seen and truly embraced your love At eighteen. I will remember and respect you to the day that I die Your beautiful babe I love you Goodbye.
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Poetry / My Burning Pyre
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Poetry / Circle of Seven
not sure why yourequested me to review this as all the 'strangers' that request reviews seem to of not unlocked them 2-3 weeks later. anyway, i think this poem needs a bit more work to make it fow a bit easier, the last line in each paragraph clunks along like a square wheel. you use alot of big descriptive words to explain not alot, sorry for being harsh, i just personally think this poem is not very good. but thats just me, 1000 000 others could like it, but then again, who cares what other...
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Plot ( About No More Plots)
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seems that every1 that has been requesting reviews off of me hasn't even unlocked them 2-3 weeks later, I'm not sure why you requested me either but anyway... poem seems cool, a few spelling mistakes in the last but thats not so important, uh it is hard to find yourself, and i don't think many people ever do... but if someone told you which path to take it wouldn't be fun! take it easy all the best ^^,
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