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LOC: Yacolt, WA
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The dog and the log “What a odd shape” said the dog to the log “Whatever do you mean” said the log “Your tail is all crooked and your fur is rough, And I can’t seem to find your toes or your nose” “I am a log you silly dog, I have no nose or toes, Or fur I suppose” “What is a log” said the curious dog “A log is a, a, well who knows” “that’s odd” said the curious dog “your not a dog and you&r...
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This is the place, this is the time This is the power of my inner human rhyme I got a voice, I got the shout I don't care, I'm going this route You think you can stop me don't even try Ill make your life hell and you'll wish you had died. This is my life, this is my time (chorus) This is the power of my voice and my rhyme I create war, I create peace, just give me a chance and ill rock this beat I want no trouble, I'm on my own, just let me be and ill leave you alone Just give me the time an...
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We all live by the Code of Rememberance The Code of Love and Trust--It binds us to the Mind,body, and soul of the planet--and ourselves The code for us is nothing but a guideline of life and death; We remember our past and look forward to the future. We hope to achieve eternal happiness, but will not. We wish for everlasting life--but what is life without death, Without love, watching our friends and family grow old While you are always there Watching, Waiting, for a time that will never come...
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We all live by the Code of Rememberance The Code of Love and Trust--It binds us to the Mind,body, and soul of the planet--and ourselves The code for us is nothing but a guideline of life and death; We remember our past and look forward to the future. We hope fo achieve eternal happiness, but will not. We wish for everlasting life--but what is life without death, Without love, watching our friends and family grow old While you are always there Watching, Waiting, for a time that will never come...
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How do you count your blessings, In love and in life they are but a figment a shadow of who and what we are and what we believe in there is but one truth, one time when all will be seen and appreciated this time could be now, later or in a million years but we must all strive to reach this time for it shall be our salvation a time of peace, a time of love, not war we shall cure disease and feed the needy but to accomplish this we must all work together for the greater good of all over the goo...
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Wow, this story had me engrossed the whole time i really enjoyed it, i plan on reading all 4 other parts because it pulls you in the entire time, great job and im looking forward to the rest
I really liked the flow to this piece, it has a lot of power to it and the visuals you create about sleep enhance the viewers enjoyment of it, overall a great piece and i would love to see it in a book of poetry
I agree, age has nothing to do with insight, i really like the view and it is true, your life is based on what you do but sometimes you just have to roll the dice and see where they land
It needs more substance, that with the spelling errors puts the reader off to it, it has the makings of a good poem but you need to incorporate more flow and vibe into it to allow it to flourish, overall it needs work but could be great
I really enjoyed this peace, it has a reading to it that really speaks out, and the repetition at the beginning and the end all work out well, overall a very well written piece
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