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AGE:
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LOC: Denmark
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 17
LOC: Denmark
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 17
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Vers1: Took me away from where i felt safe pulled me into ma painful dayz i believed in evry little word you said damn, i must've been fucked up in ma head had me apologizing all the time for no fucking reason now im realizing all the times yous the one who cheated hypnotised by your touch, fooled by your beauty i loved you so damn much but all you wanned was ma booty. Hook: Im so through with you spent all night thinking it through N there ain shit you can do and i ain crying no damn tears f...
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I found a girl she was looking very sad Cus her mum and dad got blown up in bagdad I saw her patiently looking through the trash Maybe hoping for a little bit of cash I found two crack fenes fighting over a crackpipe one got enough so he pulled out his knife He won the fight but then lost his short life Now people tell me was that really worth the fight? I found a boy he was sleeping on the street Nothing to eat and he had nothing on his feet I found a man so obsessed with his greed Spent mil...
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I found a girl she was looking very sad Cus her mum and dad got blown up in bagdad I saw her patiently looking through the trash Maybe hoping for a little bit of cash I found crack fenes fighting over a crackpipe one got enough so he pulled out his knife He won the fight but then lost his short life Now people tell me wasd that really worth the figh? I found a boy he was sleeping on the street Nothing to eat and he had nothing on his feet I found a man so obsessed with his greed Spent million...
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You step into the club like, someone buy me a drink? Fake nails, fake lashes, fake chest real mink You push away the girls to get your spot right by the sink Put on your sticky lipgloss pretty lips all covered in pink Your stare into the mirror at a girl who isnt you thinking fuck this shit put on your mask shout bitches lemme through In the beginning it was drinking every friday-saturday night All the boys theyd try their everything to get a little bite You tried to play hard to get but gave...
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You sit and cry Wondering why All this time already flew by Your kids have left you Like babybirds from their nest to fly away to look for better days You wish you could come too Cuz now you feel too afraid to be all on your own, in your own dirt and pain. Now the gutter is your bed and the bottle is your bread Your having daymares in daytime gettin more and more fucked up in your head. Don care no more about the prize just want your damn supplies. So you make your living by small crimes Smal...
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I dont believe there can be critique for poetry. because poem is art. its expressing yourself. there is no right or wrong way in writing it OR reading it. And i think you did this beautifully. Its a sad poem.. And i could feel it. Beautiful.
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