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AGE: 24
LAST LOGIN: September 08

I’m an amateur writer screaming through tears.  I thought they’d all dried and I’d simply ran out, but lately it seems this is not so.  Recent complications may spark new creations in a dark night filled with smoke and skulls.

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And when they come, it’s then we’ll leave for a life together in total peace. Not a care in the world to plague our minds just you and I, stuck in time. A beach on an island lined with palm trees swaying and singing for you and for me. We left them behind in their hurried rush their lives fading fast paced seven steps ahead of us. That mindless world where the averages dwell in an empty space, filled with empty souls and yet we’ve always seen with no capitalistic screen what they never will h...
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Poetry / Purgatory
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No future or past for this pathetic little girl lost by herself, a grain of sand in the world. She tried until tears drowned all her cries gurgling and choking when ambitions all died. The only voice she heard was a made-up God with no face or hands, only a vast, empty void. He told her to bleed all her innocent sins till the red all ran out so the devil wouldn't win. She covered her ears, screaming all the while, a piercing shrill, yet deafened by a Mile... to separate pure from poisoned sou...
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A dime plus a nickel paid up front gets you a tellers voice bland with boredom, yet nothing you want. The voice that flatlines in a far-away state on the other end of the line for your fifteen-cent rate tells only a name, a ten-digit number that gives no color to her long lost face. She rushed out in a blur slamming doors and words in broken phrases, made sense only to her. LIke a child lost in a sea of abandonment you lay upon the floor, flooding with tears 'till your lungs fill with liquid,...
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He reads me so real, reconciles our cracks, patches them with smiles to blind even those who've berated their eyes within the brightest red's blinding orange sunshine. Fall fades to winter and windchills drop, detaching himself from those that he's lost becomes his next venture, to wander away in white snowflakes to find that one that he'll love forever. In one strange night of blurred vision he discovers a distant longing, left buried underneath layers of lust-filled becomings. The nothings ...
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Poetry / Shooting Stars
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Lying in death, living in hope, spiraling towards reality to find an eternity that's been so long echoing and still we kiss away the cold as one. Shivering sentences of sense or not mimicked understanding in minds entangling deeper into the depths of our twisted souls. Wrapped in warmth we stand alone in never ending nights we never ever thought a star could so calmly kiss away that cold. Skies of mystical mile-high lights it's been found that you, that me are insanely sewn together by silken...
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Poetry / drunken rambling
I sense a deep sadness that only deepens with the poem. I hope this is not written from personal experience. Either way, you have a strong connection to a dark world that most fear to delve into.
Poetry / Yellow Cafe
Wow, I am awed by your use of language and rhythm. Wonderful images plagued my mind as they fought between happiness and fear. Reminds me somewhat of war; put simply I can't wait to read more.
I have to say you have a a very good use of language. My only critique is that the stucture makes it hard to read and comprehend. Perhaps it's better on paper, but I found myself not able to focus on the larger concept because I was trying to tie the words together. Again, fabulous articulation of pain.
Poetry / MY OWN GOD
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