SultryPoet's profile
AGE:
19
LOC: Bronx, NY
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 23
LOC: Bronx, NY
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 23
Hey my name is Samantha but you can all call me Sammie. I’m 16 and I live in the Bronx of New York. I have been writting poetry since I was 11 and I could never stop since then. Anything else you wanna know about me…just send a message and you’ll find out. mwah
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Silence Vast silence Smashing my face with violence Spread as far as the darkness that has befallen my heart That was torn and shred with the words of your heart You spoke to me You pleaded with me And begged me to understand Understand how you couldn’t be 100 percent of a man The man I need and want you to be Something I thought I did see But you said you couldn’t see nor think clearly But I said I didn’t care because you were never a 100 percent I always thought of you as ...
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My indigo blue lies in your eyes Drops of my tears are mixed with that blue Softening the color your eyes hold I hold that softened blue Close to my reddened heart And I take this softened blue Spreading shades of different blue Across a canvas Painting an empty sky A plain sky filled with the shades of your eyes Lying back and watching you watch me Everywhere I go Your eyes are on me So I walk with your blues Engraved in my brain And permanently scarred on my heart Coating me like emery Your...
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Sweet Murderer By: Samantha Headley Verse 1: I can’t believe the way you left your mark on me You stole the innocence that I once could see But what is left is just a lost memory Your love coated me like impure emery Chorus: I never knew that love could kill I was just too blind to see You were my sweet murderer gypsy Verse 2: Sit back and fall into the black lit canopy With stars that are crying their teardrops on me Sweet like the kiss from your lips I once received Blew my mind away, this ...
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My indigo blue lies in your eyes Drops of my tears are mixed with that blue Softening the color your eyes hold I hold that softened blue Close to my reddened heart And I take this softened blue Spreading shades of different blue Across a canvas Painting an empty sky A plain sky filled with the shades of your eyes Lying back and watching you watch me Everywhere I go Your eyes are on me So I walk with your blues Engraved in my brain And permanently scarred on my heart Coating me like emery Your...
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Introduction Mark is a troubled sixteen year old kid who is growing up to fast for his own good. Things has happened to him that has never been spoken. He has seen too much, and heard too much. He went through things that a kid should never have to go through. With a mother who can’t move on and having a dead beat dad and a little brother to look after. Can he survive the mental and physical pain? With the help and support of his little brother Michael, his best friend Jose, and the girl he c...
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All I can say is i truly enjoyed your work here. The story telling was lovely. Your use of descriptive imagery was wonderful. I could see this beautiful girl amongst a sea of snobby people who area dime a dozen. You area great story teller. The ending was quite shocking but i wasn't surprised in a way. I didn't feel sorry for her, although i feel guilty that I should be. Sammi PS def a fav on my list
From coming straight from the head that's lovely. I find most lovely poem come straight from the heart and mind right on the spot. I enjoyed this simple piece because it says a lot with out being too wordy. My fave line was: "You've been a foe: freezing up and changing me to winter; internal Medusa, you have turned me to stone." Great imagery with those lines. Sammi
This is a flash fiction that can totally be transformed into a full length story. I was kind of sad that it ended because I wanted to continue and know the young man and his life a bit more. I wanted to understand him cause he felt quite real. I truly have no complaints but i wish it was longer. :) You are good writer from just this small piece of work. Lovely piece of work. Sammi
I must say I have read your poem 4 times over and trying to analyze and break it down. I must say I enjoy it and it makes me think. I love the imagery and the word choice. But could you reveal to me exactly what you meant by the poem. my fav line was every line but if i have to choose it would be line 5 through 8. lovely poem tho..truly... sammi :)
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