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LOC: Easton, PA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 22
LOC: Easton, PA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 22
Hello my name is John I am a 16 year old with a different point of view and a different outlook. My friends say I am a great writer and the more I read my own work the more I begin to agree.
I’m on here looking to be discovered and to get some tips on how to improve my writing style because lets face it there is always something new to learn.
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(1st Verse) I watched her walk right out the door, I felt it break my heart, Seeing her go was tearing me apart, But then after many months, I saw your smiling face, And then I felt the hope in the winds embrace, (chorus) Love is such a crazy thing, It follows no direction, But even as it dies, It is somehow resurrected, I feel my flowing, Into a new place, and now I know the hope in the winds embrace, (2nd Verse) The first time that you smiled, I forgot all my pain, For it seems she was neve...
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Life= Birth, Love, Age, and Death.
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As I walk here in this forgotten world I remember a time when it was still remembered, I see in a flash of time a place within times great volumes were people still walked the trails of this, this gentle wood, But now there are none that walk here for this wood is forgotten by all except time itself, Time and me are now the only trespassers in this wood, But even though we are the only ones here life still thrives, For in this forgotten wood time itself has stood still.
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Excellent. very well written and it just has a warmness to it that brightens the heart.
Confused, Ok it's well written but umm. yeah I think that is were it stops. I got what u were trying to address but it had no power behind it.
Excellent, yes I said it, a poem and I love the feeling of honesty in your words. It's as though u have looked to heaven and ask this question and then wrote it down.
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