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LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: May 23
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: May 23
I am a poet and Writer, I hope you enjoy my work. ^^
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The clock above city hall read midnight, Rose had been running around the town for hours searching for it. She had gotten lost a few times but she was finally here. Tavion hid behind a building across the street and watched her hesitate going up that first step. That was his queue, he ran behind city hall at top speed, Rose didn’t even notice him run by. She walked up the steps solemnly, her bare feet not making any noise. ‘What am I going to do when I get in there?’ She as...
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Rose stepped on to the balcony, still wet from rain, it had stopped hours ago. Night was quickly falling and she couldn’t help but think that it looked darker then most. She hoped she was wrong about that. This new world had a foreboding sense about it that made her wish she was back in Dusks castle. At least there she was safe from all this. Now she would befall whatever harm the rest of the world was going to go through. Rose ran a finger along the medallion, she always felt safe when...
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Rose stepped on to the balcony, still wet from rain, it had stopped hours ago. Night was quickly falling and she couldn’t help but think that it looked darker then most. She hoped she was wrong about that. This new world had a foreboding sense about it that made her wish she was back in Dusks castle. At least there she was safe from all this. Now she would befall whatever harm the rest of the world was going to go through. Rose ran a finger along the medallion, she always felt safe when...
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“I feel like an idiot. He just led me along, I didn’t even realize what was going on. I wish I could go back and keep myself away from him. I wish I could take back every moment I wasted on him. What’s really sad is that, even after saying that, I know I’m still in love with him. True feelings die hard, even when they were used on a mind controlled puppet. I wish I could kiss him one more time. Just as one of those final goodbyes, like you see in movies. I keep saying ...
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Eclipse took a deep breath and got ready to take the plunge. His parents hadn’t heard all of what happened while they were gone. Nothing about a strange girl who wanted him to translate threatening letters she had gotten. Eclipse opened his door and seen his parents sitting together on the couch. It sounded like they were talking about something serious. He ducked down behind the railing and listened. “I don’t know how long I’ll be able to stay here…If I’...
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I love this peice, the scene is set beautifully and it would make an excelent story. Even though I like it just like this. Keep writing.
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It really brings you into what the characters feeling, and personally I love the use of the trees. It almost feels as if the character talking is genuinly upset for the trees, the same way he or she would be for humans. I think the best part in it though is 'It doesn't make sense. It's not fair. But what ever did? And what ever was?' Whatever you do to the story leave that line.
The only thing I didn't quite get about this piece was the second line. I didn't think the term ' exclamation point' fit. But otherwise it really showcased how we really live, only paying attention to the finish line and not stopping to admire the scenery. Great job.
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