Suz's profile

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AGE: 51
LOC: Dallas, TX
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 29

They asked for a Profile
Umm, I dunno,
let me think for a while

What can I put,
how is it said
what can I say,
I won’t later dread

I’m a complex person,
multi-facetted,
some say with vision,
but
I’m lacking precision

I’m silly, I’m good,I’m bad,
misunderstood
I march to my own drummer
I’m right where I stood

I hate hypocrisy and duplicity
I loathe intolerance, small minds
and bigots.
I love simplicity

My aim in life is
to live it to the fullest
I love my family,
my friends,
on this,
I am earnest

I have good days and bad days
and some in-between
Some say I’m nice
but I can be mean

A Profile, who I am,
will this go into a circular file?
is this an exam?
If it is
you’ve been had
...

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Non-fiction / Starbuck's Traveler
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I noticed him as I parked in front of the Starbucks around the corner from work one day. I had craved a caffeine fix and stopped by on my lunch hour. He seemed so out of place, I just sat and watched him for a minute, almost ashamed at my interest. He had a hiker's, stuffed to the seams, backpack next to him, the kind with the rolled up sleeping bag on top. His clothes where neat and clean, but you could tell they were worn, probably bought used at an Army surplus store, or even given free fr...
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Poetry / Life Without Breathing
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Life Without Breathing Her eyes were the unfathomable darkness that hides her pain deeply in vaulted secrecy where the naked eye could never find it. She carried the lock around her heart for safe keeping. It wasn't so much about keeping others out, as much as it was about keeping it in. It's like that with those who've been hurt so deeply. They react in two different ways. They could either unleash it at random onto unsuspecting innocents creating more pain and destruction, or keep it locked...
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Poetry / Ageless Question
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I escaped the physical for a breathless moment I floated effortlessly in a cocoon of Love, Peace, and Contentment an effortless state of being, cleansed and bright I saw the great constellation that is my life a quiet serenity of spirit, interwoven with purity and light Soul and Spirit re-united in serene certainty I was given a glimpse through this ethereal veil It was offered freely with absolution To Be or Not To Be, the age old question an Angel's voice whispered, was not a solution To do...
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Short Story / Life Without Breathing
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Her eyes were the unfathomable darkness that hides her pain deeply in vaulted secrecy where the naked eye could never find it. She carried the lock around her heart for safe keeping. It wasn't so much about keeping others out, as much as it was about keeping it in. It's like that with those who've been hurt so deeply. They react in two different ways. They could either unleash it at random onto unsuspecting innocents creating more pain and destruction, or keep it locked up tightly inside of t...
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Poetry / Stacia's Song
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Isn't she Lovely? with her Beautiful Smile Eyes that sparkle with playful valor Her heart is to big for my piece of mind There is no confining her spirit mightly she roars it soars across the heavens looking for peace She is a woman child looking for space to keep her warm and keep her safe with windows she can manage to open and close as she is compelled This is to distill the premise she is tough as nails she has a mighty spirit but her knees can get weak My beautiful dove hiding in hawk's ...
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Non-fiction / Human Condition
by o0grip0o
Locked
Non-fiction / we are accidents waiting to happen
by Celee
I love the thoughts and meaning of what you wrote. You described your feelings and thoughts in a way I could understand and relate to.
Poetry / Write Lines
by Abu_Lyric
Very fun read. I especially liked ~ Most writers I know, still receive a giro No PC, but they just use biro They opinionate, Make fun of the state (Which does a good job on itself anyway) Either open your heart or go insane I look forward to more.
Short Story / Poetic Prose/Narrative Poetry??
by matty00
Locked
Non-fiction / A Journey Towards Spiritual Love
by herblady
You jump right in and grab the reader's attention. I like how you tell the outcome first, then the beginning, and mix it back and forth. Sometimes you can lose attention when the set up is too long. But you need the explanation to set the scene. Good mix. I rated you a 6 only for the reasoning that it is hard to become published. A book with this content being published depends on the public's interest, which is usually fed by other current events. So it can be a challenge. Good luck. Believe...
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