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AGE: 44
LOC: Walsenburg, CO
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: March 02

Just a few words to all that review my work – IF YOU ARE GOING TO GO ON AND ON about PUNCTUATION AND CAPITALIZATION then do not bother to read. I am a firm believer in the use of line length and form, and find the conventional use of p&c distasteful and distracting. Please do a web search on Poetry and line lengths – poetry and punctuation, and broaden your horizons. In prose and other writing such conventions are needed. In Poetry it is not! I am published I have graduated from college as an English major and I still find poetry that has to rely on punctuation to make a point sad. It is my opinion and the opinion of many other poets the world over. So do not waste my points on a review that centers on this complaint. If you still wish t…

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Poetry / Our Heart Song
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Many dreams begin with you many nights of passion grew days to months to years we two your pain so hidden your past so dark my nightmare all vanished fast the blanket of love spead about to heal us both within without our years threatened breathing lost hope forgot rapid heartbeats fear at hand loss of this? please hold my hand bound we two the physicians call my heart bleeds your body frail awaiting the heal that comes slowly so slowly life a mountian we climb this mountain we now face is...
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Poetry / I Lie
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Awakened by silver moonbeams streaming through windows wide glinting off mirrors that wall this our room to hide I reach over to you slide my hand down your chest muscled hair roughened strong I am blessed lightly you stir at my sweet gentle touch even in sleep so deep far away you reach out to captured my soul my senses heightened to the sound of your breath deeply relaxed steady and strong so very much like you I can not help but to wander my hands caressing with love that which brings plea...
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Short Story / Snapshot
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Snapshot photography, each frame an experience.
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Explore Beauty, Share Experience, Celebrate Self
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Poetry / Do I Dare?
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Open the bolted door Open the window and let in the air Open the closet and let the skeleton walk The bolted door protects from the unknown The unknown out there Where pretty people are ugly Inside Where their words are bitter Filled with hate and lies The closed window suffocates at times It gets hot and stuffy in here Yet fresh air can carry with it great burdens On it travel the voices of those that pass Harsh and full of opinions foreign to this mind The closet hides all things feared The...
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Poetry / Listening
Reading this took me back to a cafe where I would listen to the words of poets on stage where one of the poet's every poem spoke directly to me and I would hang on each word and swirl it about in my mind - I love things that make me thing and take me on a journey all my own. In poetry the art and beaty of it is not always to see exactly what the writer experienced but to sometimes take a journey all our own on thier words. So Thank you for letting me travel on your words.
Poetry / Samhain Poem
Well done over all. I found the word choices excellent and the intro unecessary. A few of the longer lines I think could/should be broken but it really takes very littel away from the smooth flow and is a minor issue.
50.0% Review Quality (2 Votes)
Poetry / WENSARA AMORATE
Love poems are the heart of poetry in my opinion and this was written in a tone and tense I appreciate. I found it rather long and involved but pleasingly so and warnings always intrigue me. The use of the historical greek was an addition I found particularly endearing. Over all a great write and refreshing when in this world so many are writing the woe woe woe of it all.
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I liked the poem in that a deeper meaning can be found. It speaks to and of the inner man. I am however wearied by the continual use of the ing and past tense and think that this would be a much more powerful piece if it were brought into a present tense.
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