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AGE:
15
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 05
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 05
...itoshii hito…nakanaide, warattemisete
namida ga mitakute “suki” tte itta n ja nai n da yo?...
My name is Karissa.
My birthday is coming up, October 7th.
I am a big fan of JRock(Japanese Rock), GRock/GPop(something I made up for German Rock and German Pop), some spanish music, and definetly have to should out to my Korean boyz, DBSK.
I also have American interests in music, don’t worry. I just like foreign alittle bit better, but I still give mad love tot he 100 and something American bands I crave.
~I can be catagorized as many things, but normal is not one of them. I am proud to say I am abnormal. I can get down with the best of them and stand up for what I bel…
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“Wh…Wh…What? Who-What are you and why do you want my brother?” I stammered, scooting closer to Blair. “My name is unimportant and as I stated before, Charles Blair Emerson must die.” The wolf growled intensely after taking a look at Blair. For the first time since the after the wolf appeared, I allowed myself to look at Blair; to honestly look at him. He was crouched on the ground like a snake ready to strike. His eyes were as hard and black as onyx and h...
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"No, no. That's not how it's done at all." I repremanded my younger brother, Blair. "Do you wanna learn the move or not?" "If you're so great, why don't you show me how you would do it...again?" Blair blushed. I rolled my eyes at him, running a scarred hand through my shaggy, yet spikey hair. I had recieved my strikingly good looks from my mom; her high cheekbones, pointed...
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"Emerson!" A voice called as Blair and I entered the new sporting goods store. "Fuente!" I yelled back, grabbing my best friend Tali into a hug. "How are ya doin' girl? When did you start working here?" "A few days after it opened. The money's good and the boss is super nice." She replied, pulling away and returning to her position behind the...
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"No, no. That's not how it's done at all." I chaisted my younger brother, Blair. "Do you wanna learn the move or not?" "If you're so great, why don't you show me how you would do it...again?" Blair blushed lightly, admitting his own imcompetance. I rolled my jade eyes at him, running a scarred hand through my shaggy, yet spikey, snow white hair. I had recieved my strikingly good looks fr...
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It was then, at that very moment, that I realized that the man that stood before me, sharp incissors bared, ready and waiting for bloodshed, was not the brother I once knew. The one that would run to me with his problems, entrusted me with his secrets. The defenseless little boy seeking my comfort after a tiny cut or scrape was gone forever. A ravenous monster with a lust for blood had taken his place. Doing the only thing I could think o...
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It's true, it isn't much, but you are so beautiful and eloquent with what you say and so careful with you're diction that there are millions of thoughts racing through the readers head after this; leading to questions and research. This is a great poem and i find nothing wrong except i think you maybe should have capitolized.
This sort of reminds me of the government and its relation with the people. I don't know if thats what you meant by it, but it just came across that way to me. It's not a bad thing though, don't fret. The first stanza reminds me of some time long ago when the people had a high trust in the government and they helped it willingly and such. The second is like the government is in danger, but the people are too focused with what is going on at home to even care what is going on with it. The thir...
I love this. I mean honestly, I can relate to every single line in this. I'm about 2 years younger than you and might not have experienced everything you have or if I did, definetly not the same way, but I can relate and that is a very good thing in a rap or in anything written really. I loved how when i was reading it that I could picture it being rapped in front of me; the diction, the articulation. I loved how I could feel it, not just see it. These were my favorite lines of the entire thi...
i'm kind of confused. Like I can see the creativity and the passion behind it, but I don't understand it. I think its because I don't know what hackneyed mean, which I shall look up now, and because I never understood 6 word memoirs and how they worked. However, like I said early, I could feel the passion sort of seeping out of the words and it was creative. :P Peace!
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